Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Sunsets are wonderful, no matter what time they occur, and this artwork is proof of that just beautiful, it is hard to paint an image in so few words, but you have nailed it, very well presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2025

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Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

I really love the quiet beauty of your poem. The way you captured the moment of sunset at five thirty feels so peaceful. The word "gloaming" adds a nice touch, making it feel even more special. It's like you've frozen a moment in time! Beautiful work!

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2025

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Comment from Trina Layne

Excellent

An apt description of the imagery you have here. Thanks for sharing your writing. Gloaming is certainly an uncommon word for me. I learned a new word today, and congrats on your entry!

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2024

Comment from royowen

Excellent

At the moment, sunset is about 8:45 pm, but then it's summer also. This is a very good entry in this 2/4/2 poetry contest. You have a very good chance, good luck, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2024

Comment from TPAC

Excellent

Nice picture, feeling definitely this is an island, finding your statement capturing the coming night upon the waters. A tranquil adventure in my stated opinion: needed that refreshing sea breeze.

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2024

Comment from June Sargent

Excellent

I love that word. Gloaming. Have run across it only on this site. You've painted a stunning picture with just a few words. Sunset is my time of peace. And the artwork reflects that beautifully.

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2024

Comment from jaded831

Excellent

Your poem captured the moment. I had to look up the meaning of gloaming, then the poem had meaning. I don't like it when sunset comes that early, once the sun goes down so do I.

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2024

Comment from jake cosmos aller

Excellent

sunset and sunrise are my favorite times of the day. I like to start my day drinking coffee, watching the news, writing my journals and looking at the sun rise

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2024

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

Hi Elaine, you poem bring back memories
of when I lived in Florida...2 of the things
I miss the most...are the sunrise and the sunsets
on the beach...off the water...sigh...

I love your poem...very nicely written...
and your picture is stunning...love Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2024

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Sunsets are beautiful and it gets dark around 3pm in my town. Your few words remind me of some wonderful sunsets I have seen, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2024