Willing Hearts
Viewing comments for Chapter 45 "Chapter 27 B Willing Hearts"Solve a crime and fall in love at the same time?
31 total reviews
Comment from WinterMagic
Characters are well defined with lots of personality. i am liking several characters. they have interesting development possibilities. Interesting reading want to know what happens next.
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Characters are well defined with lots of personality. i am liking several characters. they have interesting development possibilities. Interesting reading want to know what happens next.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2024
Comment from nomi338
I love this story and the characters that come alive and express the varied differences that exist in the human family. I think that Sami and Noah are an excellent couple who deserve the very best of life that is available to them.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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I love this story and the characters that come alive and express the varied differences that exist in the human family. I think that Sami and Noah are an excellent couple who deserve the very best of life that is available to them.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Douglas Goff
Yummy! I love roast duck!
Lots going on here. She's a smart cookie. Might have picked up on the ring trick.
Take a look at this line:
She smiled. "Now where we going?"
(Is where correct? Not sure if it needs an apostrophe.
Fun read!
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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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Yummy! I love roast duck!
Lots going on here. She's a smart cookie. Might have picked up on the ring trick.
Take a look at this line:
She smiled. "Now where we going?"
(Is where correct? Not sure if it needs an apostrophe.
Fun read!
D
Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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Normally for correct English it would say, 'Now where are we going?' but people don't speak that way. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from GWHARGIS
It seems almost surreal that they are out and about in the real world now. I like how her mother did the realistic mother thing and compared her to her father. That's what parents do, Any bull headed or annoying characteristics they blame on the other parent. Enjoyable read. Gretchen
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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It seems almost surreal that they are out and about in the real world now. I like how her mother did the realistic mother thing and compared her to her father. That's what parents do, Any bull headed or annoying characteristics they blame on the other parent. Enjoyable read. Gretchen
Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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So true. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Mateo has a long name lol. In Spain we have long name too. Mine is.... Maria del Val Santiesteban Aceituno, my nickname is MariVal. I took my exhusband last name, Bayles.
I love how the story is moving along. It's hard to believe Noah and Sami met a little over a month.
I know Noah is getting ready to ask her hand in marriage... how romantic.
Well done!
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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Mateo has a long name lol. In Spain we have long name too. Mine is.... Maria del Val Santiesteban Aceituno, my nickname is MariVal. I took my exhusband last name, Bayles.
I love how the story is moving along. It's hard to believe Noah and Sami met a little over a month.
I know Noah is getting ready to ask her hand in marriage... how romantic.
Well done!
Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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Most of my Hispanic friends have long names. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sanku
I likedit very much that you included the church going in it.Noah agreeing is a great thing.and a religious faith is a solid foundation for a life to gether
You also must have researched for the self defence training...Well done
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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I likedit very much that you included the church going in it.Noah agreeing is a great thing.and a religious faith is a solid foundation for a life to gether
You also must have researched for the self defence training...Well done
Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. I appreciate it.
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Barbara,
This is an exceptional story, written with your Christian audience in mind.
I like your style of moving the action along with your nice dialogue.
Good luck, Barbara,
This work should surely sell well with your audience.
Happy Thanksgiving to you and yours.
Blessings,
Best wishes,
Cindy
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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Barbara,
This is an exceptional story, written with your Christian audience in mind.
I like your style of moving the action along with your nice dialogue.
Good luck, Barbara,
This work should surely sell well with your audience.
Happy Thanksgiving to you and yours.
Blessings,
Best wishes,
Cindy
Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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Thank you for the encouragement. I appreciate it.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
She did a good job of taking care of the man who tried to grab her. Her mother found a good way to learn her ring size to help Noah. He is really trying to share her life when he agrees to go to church, although he has never been to one before. There is still a lot of difference in their lives that could ruin their love affair.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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She did a good job of taking care of the man who tried to grab her. Her mother found a good way to learn her ring size to help Noah. He is really trying to share her life when he agrees to go to church, although he has never been to one before. There is still a lot of difference in their lives that could ruin their love affair.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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We'll see if they can work things out. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Tim Margetts
Ok, I will be honest, I don't normally read romance, but this popped up so I thought why not.
I loved the bit about Grandma's ring, that was sweet... then beating up... combat... what the actual.
OK I didn't see that coming. Nicely written though.
I am surprised to say, I enjoyed this.
Tim
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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Ok, I will be honest, I don't normally read romance, but this popped up so I thought why not.
I loved the bit about Grandma's ring, that was sweet... then beating up... combat... what the actual.
OK I didn't see that coming. Nicely written though.
I am surprised to say, I enjoyed this.
Tim
Comment Written 25-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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Thank you for dropping by. I actually do have quite a few male fans, which totally shocked me. I do write romance, but...I always have a back story that is normally some sort of a mystery. Please drop by again.
Comment from Paul McFarland
A nice post, Barb. Things are looking up. Maybe Marc is going to get a taste of Sami's training. The reader is now anticipating when Noah is going to pop the question.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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A nice post, Barb. Things are looking up. Maybe Marc is going to get a taste of Sami's training. The reader is now anticipating when Noah is going to pop the question.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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LOL That would be great. Marc deserves it, but probably not. LOL Thank you for the kind review.