Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

This is an excellent entry for this prompt. Your artwork is stunning and sets up your theme perfectly. Great choice of end rhymes that support the theme. I would rethink the title a bit, I know its a lead in to the poem, but your reader does not automatically make that connection... perhaps "A Captive Mind" or a "Tortured Mind"... oh well, obviously its your verse... just suggestions. Great job.

Melissa

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025

Thank you very much, i was up in the air about the title

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

Your poem is so brief but works so well. For me your poem makes me think of how our thoughts and memories are so connected. Beautifully done! It's amazing how just a few words can make you think.

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025

Thank you very much

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 1-6-1, My..., has the proper formatting and reminds the readers that the mind is a wonderful and terrible thing to baste, haste, paste, taste, or waste.

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025

Thank you very much

Comment from zanya

Excellent

Our mind is so precious to us and the many and varied functions it performs for us - an excellent illustration for the poem and most of all it holds our memories

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025

Thank you very much

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

This 1 6 1 is well written and thought provoking. The image presentation goes well with it. I just found one note: .memories I enjoyed reviewing this. Best wishes to you, Alex

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025

Thank you very much