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Freedom is Found in Change

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Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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I think I understand your philosophy of being adaptable to life events and able to live for the present. Your free verse is a pleasing read and is complemented well with a delightful visual depicting childhood happiness. Well done and good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2024

Comment from zanya
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It's an interesting angle on the philosophy of life writing prompt and there is much herein to chew on, so to speak- the final two lines are especially inspiring.

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2024

Comment from Tom Horonzy
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Well-versed, though I think "philosophy does not have ups and downs."
Philosophy of men, perhaps, by Godly philosophy was written by a never changing God though with free will we, as mortals, tests His resolve to have us return from whence we originated - unsoiled.

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2024

Comment from Regina Elliott
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Dear poet, my very best wishes for the contest with
your philosophical poem. It's
breezy and flows well. Sometimes we need to think
like a child with wonderment.
Have a mellow evening.
Blessings

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2024