Mother Nature's Song
her musical notes,an antidote to our woes8 total reviews
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 ode poetry writing prompt. Great job on this poem. The sound of water outdoors in all of its forms has always been a stress reliever for me and something that soothes the worst day. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 ode poetry writing prompt. Great job on this poem. The sound of water outdoors in all of its forms has always been a stress reliever for me and something that soothes the worst day. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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Yes , water does miracles for anyone that is stressed out.
I love the sound and I love to drink it too.
We have well water that comes from the mountain I am perched on at 700 metres .. my pets love it , the garden thrives on it.
Comment from Me and Erin G
Love it. Love the trio of rhymes: trickle, giggle, and ripple. But what sends me is "streams giggle". Priceless. Excellent work on a 5-7-5. You'll get my vote!
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2024
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Love it. Love the trio of rhymes: trickle, giggle, and ripple. But what sends me is "streams giggle". Priceless. Excellent work on a 5-7-5. You'll get my vote!
Comment Written 15-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2024
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I love rain and licking the raindrops from the tips of the leaves.
I have a stream close by that snakes through a pine forest.
In Winter, it is quiet but come Spring it comes to life as the snow melts on the mountain above.
I'm glad you enjoyed the read and a warm thank you for the vote !
I won a shared blue ribbon, I didn't even think I would make the podium. (biggrin)
Keep safe!
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Mother Nature's Song, has the proper formatting and suggests that the rinsing rain affects us as it does the plants and creatures in the wider world.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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This 5-7-5, Mother Nature's Song, has the proper formatting and suggests that the rinsing rain affects us as it does the plants and creatures in the wider world.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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Thank you for reading and leaving a comment.
I made the podium and won the blue ribbon together with Boogienights.
I was surprised, I thought the poem was okay but not podium material.
keep safe!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I enjoyed the originality of this 5-7-5 - the imagery of your rhyming verbs and the way nature's wonder of water can calm the soul. Great image too. Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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I enjoyed the originality of this 5-7-5 - the imagery of your rhyming verbs and the way nature's wonder of water can calm the soul. Great image too. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 14-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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Thank you for the kind words..
Glad you enjoyed the theme and the artwork !
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
This is a great 5-7-5 ode poem. The wording gives the reader a visual. The picture is perfect for this poem. I like how your second line says, "streams giggle and waves ripple." The reader can almost visualize it as raindrops fall into the stream.
Great job
Cecilia
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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This is a great 5-7-5 ode poem. The wording gives the reader a visual. The picture is perfect for this poem. I like how your second line says, "streams giggle and waves ripple." The reader can almost visualize it as raindrops fall into the stream.
Great job
Cecilia
Comment Written 14-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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I tried to have some rhyme when allowed.
Glad you enjoyed my wee poem.
I love the sound of rain and lick the raindrops from the tips of the leaves.
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You're welcome
Cecilia
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Franca,
What an extraordinary poem using just a few syllables!
I love that you made streams have human emotions, like giggling.
An exceptional entry, Tempest!
Good luck and hugs,
Cindy
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Franca,
What an extraordinary poem using just a few syllables!
I love that you made streams have human emotions, like giggling.
An exceptional entry, Tempest!
Good luck and hugs,
Cindy
Comment Written 14-Nov-2024
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This is such a soothing poem! I love your word choices like "streams giggle" and "waves ripple" to share what feels like a peaceful movement. The final line, "stress washes away" feels like a perfect ending to this moment you've shared! It's like a little escape into nature - wonderfully written!
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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This is such a soothing poem! I love your word choices like "streams giggle" and "waves ripple" to share what feels like a peaceful movement. The final line, "stress washes away" feels like a perfect ending to this moment you've shared! It's like a little escape into nature - wonderfully written!
Comment Written 14-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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I thought the verb "wash " went well with the water theme..rain, stream and waves.
I appreciate your kind comments!
Comment from Brenda Strauser
I enjoyed reading.this poem. Picture is hood choice for the words. I like the words: when raindrops trickle , actually the whole poem. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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I enjoyed reading.this poem. Picture is hood choice for the words. I like the words: when raindrops trickle , actually the whole poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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Thank you for reading and posting a comment.
Glad you enjoyed the read.