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November 6, 2024

a poem

12 total reviews 
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Good artwork and presentation, Bill.
-Thanks for sharing this poem.
-You ask very good questions, and
make good points about them, especially
the one about Biden and democracy.
-You said it all in the last two lines,
and I am glad you shared this because
I wouldn't even know where to start!

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
    Thanks, Pam
Comment from mermaids
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Excellent use of words to capture the post election day. I like your last line "and the world will spin eccentrically." It certainly will. Apparently if you commit a crime and become president, you are free from justice as your poem states.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
    I will need to do more crime to get ahead.
Comment from patcelaw
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This is well written, and I enjoyed listening to it. I do hope you're right in that fact that the Donald Trump will be freed from justice. It only stands the reason that those cases were gonna be thrown out against him anyway. Patricia.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
    Thanks, Patricia
Comment from ESOSTINE
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From a stranger's position, I believe that all hope of a better America and by extension a safer world under Trump is not lost. Thanks so much for sharing your beautiful poem. Regards.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
    All felons should be allowed to get any job, since the president can.
Comment from jim vecchio
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Not only that, but there are no more 10 cent Twinkies and Clarabell went away and never come back.There are no more magazines.There's only one magazine. It's called The Magazine. There are no more news shows. There's only one news show. It's called "The Breaking News Show'. And there are no more channels to turn, only a convenient little remote.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
    Whatever.
reply by jim vecchio on 06-Nov-2024
    No more words to say till next time.
Comment from Brenda Strauser
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Thank you for writing this poem. This is exactly how I feel. How did this happen? What is going to happen to our country? These are the questions I am concerned about.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
    We will survive this too, Brenda.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Hello , Bill, I'm so depressed and in disbelief. Harris did so well and we had so much support. Now Trump has unlimited power, he has the senate and the house too. God help us.

Well done

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
    Right before our eyes, the nation crumbles.
reply by Gypsy Blue Rose on 06-Nov-2024
    Yes, you are right. I'm afraid to hear or read the news.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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I appreciate you posting this today and agree with your completely on the sentiments but can't really comment too fully on it. Everything feels too raw at the moment. good job.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
    Now there is a double whammy. Even if Trump steps in front of a bullet, his VP is an even bigger nut.
Comment from Teri7
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Bill, This is a very interesting poem you have penned. You used very neat imagery. I was so happy to see President Donald J. Trump win against those that had come against him for so long! Blessings, teri

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
    Now you have the convicted tax cheat, top secret document thief, and world class liar as your president. God help us all.
reply by Teri7 on 06-Nov-2024
    We all have sinned and come short of the Glory of God. If he can fix the mess the dems have made I thank God for him and I will keep praying for him and his family!
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
    He has a lot more havoc to unleash before God smites him.
reply by Teri7 on 06-Nov-2024
    You know Bill I prayed for many days before I voted for anyone. I voted for the one God put on my heart. I am a child of God and I will continue to pray for our leaders as the Bible tells us to do that. If God made a way for him to be President then God has a work for him to do. We are all put here on this earth for a purpose. Look at all the ones in the Bible God used. It was not the ones we probably would have chosen. God equips those He calls. Just pray for him to do God's will for America. I am. Blessings, Teri
Comment from lyenochka
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It appears to be so. I think there has to be some corruption in the minds of these red states. I guess people think the economy is more important than integrity. That bodes badly for our children with a role model like that lying criminal.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
    I suspected when Trump was wasting time at rallies that he knew that he was a shoe-in. Whatever corruption was present will never be looked for by the Republican Senate.
reply by lyenochka on 06-Nov-2024
    Hopefully, the FBI and DOJ are not in his pocket.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
    He has learned to jettison all professional staffers and fill the spots with loyalists. He will never fear or doubt any decision will get more than a dirty look before being passed into law.
reply by lyenochka on 06-Nov-2024
    And all people of color will get "dirty looks" like I did the last time he was in office. Sigh. Tell me it's not true!