In His Time
Things don't always happen as we wish16 total reviews
Comment from Jacob1395
I could really picture this scene as I was reading it, Carol. It made me think of the Florida hurricane last week as I was reading and I was really hoping the people would come back to rescue Katie and her dad, I was sure they would. An excellent piece, I enjoyed reading it.
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I could really picture this scene as I was reading it, Carol. It made me think of the Florida hurricane last week as I was reading and I was really hoping the people would come back to rescue Katie and her dad, I was sure they would. An excellent piece, I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
Comment from Douglas Goff
BeaUtifully written and so very timely with the nightmares people are suffering with the hurricanes down south.
Any time a puppy is rescued, so am all in!
Great read!
D
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BeaUtifully written and so very timely with the nightmares people are suffering with the hurricanes down south.
Any time a puppy is rescued, so am all in!
Great read!
D
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
Comment from Wendy G
Very vivid description of their drastic circumstances, and the tension and emotions running high in both the girl and her father. I am so glad she heard the desperate cries of the puppy and they were able to save him as well. Beautifully written.
Wendy
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Very vivid description of their drastic circumstances, and the tension and emotions running high in both the girl and her father. I am so glad she heard the desperate cries of the puppy and they were able to save him as well. Beautifully written.
Wendy
Comment Written 15-Oct-2024
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
You sure built up the tension well. Cute little ending. I don't really know what I was expecting, I knew she would be rescued, otherwise why tell the story, but I did not see this coming. :-)
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You sure built up the tension well. Cute little ending. I don't really know what I was expecting, I knew she would be rescued, otherwise why tell the story, but I did not see this coming. :-)
Comment Written 15-Oct-2024
Comment from zanya
This is a most enjoyable read, creating a level of suspense from the beginning as the waters rose all around - the terrified puppy showing up to bring a sense of joy in the difficult situation.
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This is a most enjoyable read, creating a level of suspense from the beginning as the waters rose all around - the terrified puppy showing up to bring a sense of joy in the difficult situation.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2024
Comment from Carol Clark2
What an emotional heart-tug of a story! Yes, God's timing is always perfect. This was a great example of that. It's well written with good dialogue throughout. Blessings. Carol
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What an emotional heart-tug of a story! Yes, God's timing is always perfect. This was a great example of that. It's well written with good dialogue throughout. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 15-Oct-2024
Comment from karenina
Thanks, Carol...
As we've all been riveted on the hurricanes and tornadoes ravaging Florida through to North Carolina, it's nice to read of prayers answered, with an adorable saved puppy no less!
You have me smiling as I sip my afternoon tea.
I just heard there are 24 confirmed deaths from Milton. I pray for those who God called home as well!
Karenina
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
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Thanks, Carol...
As we've all been riveted on the hurricanes and tornadoes ravaging Florida through to North Carolina, it's nice to read of prayers answered, with an adorable saved puppy no less!
You have me smiling as I sip my afternoon tea.
I just heard there are 24 confirmed deaths from Milton. I pray for those who God called home as well!
Karenina
Comment Written 15-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
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I learned from Carissa that the outskirts of the hurricane reached them but they were okay, just some siding missing from the side of the house. Lots of wind she said. I felt this story gave a little joy and relief from all the sadness.
Smiles, Carol
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It does...
It is comforting to glimpse the silver lining in the frightening whirl of dark clouds!
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I pray all clouds soon have silver linings! And if by some miracle, a few silver coins are dropped that will be acceptable too! lol
Comment from Brenda Strauser
I loved this story. It was so well written and descriptive. It is hard to wait on God for something. I have been praying for a year for something,. I get so impatient, wondering when he will answer my prayers. I know he will in his time. The story was so interesting and I enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
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I loved this story. It was so well written and descriptive. It is hard to wait on God for something. I have been praying for a year for something,. I get so impatient, wondering when he will answer my prayers. I know he will in his time. The story was so interesting and I enjoyed it.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much, Brenda. I so appreciate your kindness and am thrilled that you enjoyed the story. I shall pray that he hears and answers your prayers soon. Bless you!
Smiles and hugs, Carol
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Thank you so much. You are very kind Caril. I love your stories. They are written so well.
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thank you! Have a terrific day! Smiles to you!
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You too. I was wondering how long have you been writing?
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I've written all my life, Brenda. During my childhood, it was my way of holding my life together. then as I got older, I found comfort in writing and letting my feelings explode on the written page. Now that my husband has passed, I promised him I would continue to write. I truly love it.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
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You are a great writer. I would continue to write.
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Thank you so much! Your kindness is appreciated.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This story brought tears to my eyes. I enjoyed reading. Thank you for sharing this very precious story with us. Yes, God works in mysterious ways but always has a reason for what He does.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
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This story brought tears to my eyes. I enjoyed reading. Thank you for sharing this very precious story with us. Yes, God works in mysterious ways but always has a reason for what He does.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
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Thanks Barbara. I had to shake off some of the psycho vibes I've been reading and writing, so I thought the rescue of a puppy would be just the trick. Glad that you enjoyed it.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Carol. I am reading along,immersed in the story, emotions running high and you add a helpless puppy to the mix? You really know how to tug at the heart! Great story especially coming on the devastation made by hurricane Milton. Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
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Carol. I am reading along,immersed in the story, emotions running high and you add a helpless puppy to the mix? You really know how to tug at the heart! Great story especially coming on the devastation made by hurricane Milton. Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 15-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
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Thanks so much, Mrilyn. I thought I was the only one who cried over helpless puppies. I so appreciate your review.
Smiles, Carol