nostalgia
a panorama of memories4 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Such a wonderfully worded appeal to both memory and emotion here! :-) Thanx so much for sharing today and best of luck to you in the competition! ;)
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Such a wonderfully worded appeal to both memory and emotion here! :-) Thanx so much for sharing today and best of luck to you in the competition! ;)
Comment Written 03-Oct-2024
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Author,
This is a very lovely poem, complemented by a beautiful poem. I'm still waiting for our fall foliage here to blossom.
Great 5-7-5.
Best wishes,
Cindy
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Author,
This is a very lovely poem, complemented by a beautiful poem. I'm still waiting for our fall foliage here to blossom.
Great 5-7-5.
Best wishes,
Cindy
Comment Written 30-Sep-2024
Comment from jessizero
You got the syllable counts right for this 5-7-5, and the picture you supplied complemented the poem perfectly. I wonder why you chose to captialize "Autumn" but nothing else, but it's not a criticism. I enjoyed this poem. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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You got the syllable counts right for this 5-7-5, and the picture you supplied complemented the poem perfectly. I wonder why you chose to captialize "Autumn" but nothing else, but it's not a criticism. I enjoyed this poem. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2024
Comment from Sarah Probe 1
so much description in just a few words, many thanks for a very inspirational poem, and your colourful painting accordingly described autumn's beauty perfectly,
well done, i hope you win the contest,
Kind regards,
Sarah
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so much description in just a few words, many thanks for a very inspirational poem, and your colourful painting accordingly described autumn's beauty perfectly,
well done, i hope you win the contest,
Kind regards,
Sarah
Comment Written 29-Sep-2024