Valse de poèmes
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Petals "inspiring poems for the souls and hearts
3 total reviews
Comment from Jasmine Girl
You correctly described the dying love by using roses as metaphor and ABC poem as a form. Roses will dry up first and still stay together for a long time. So your love may not be dead yet. Or you can start fresh.
Well done.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2024
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You correctly described the dying love by using roses as metaphor and ABC poem as a form. Roses will dry up first and still stay together for a long time. So your love may not be dead yet. Or you can start fresh.
Well done.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2024
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thank you dear
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Wow. I thought this was so creative! The idea of losing petals captures love's decline in such a unique way. Your choice of words creates an emotional landscape. I could feel the weight of each line as the rose loses its vitality. Again, so creative and so well written!
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2024
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Wow. I thought this was so creative! The idea of losing petals captures love's decline in such a unique way. Your choice of words creates an emotional landscape. I could feel the weight of each line as the rose loses its vitality. Again, so creative and so well written!
Comment Written 22-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2024
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Hi Michael,
Thank you so much for the compliment and the 5 star review, yes the poem reflects the destruction effect of the loss of love, that i compared to a dying rose, that wasn?t watered anymore and left behind, i am glad you enjoy my poems. God bless You :) Sarah
Comment from Bill Schott
This ABC poem, Petals, has the proper formatting and makes the metaphorical comparison, perhaps, with a relationship and its odds of survival.
I feel the placement of the guiding letters in the front of each line is distracting and unnecessary.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2024
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This ABC poem, Petals, has the proper formatting and makes the metaphorical comparison, perhaps, with a relationship and its odds of survival.
I feel the placement of the guiding letters in the front of each line is distracting and unnecessary.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2024
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Thank you Pamusart for your review of appreciation and for your helpful opinion