Collection of a Lifetime
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Silver Leaves"a collection of poetry and experience
5 total reviews
Comment from patcelaw
Leaves of the aspirin are very beautiful and your poem is equally beautiful. I enjoyed very much listening to it and I wish you the very best with all of your writing. Patricia .
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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Leaves of the aspirin are very beautiful and your poem is equally beautiful. I enjoyed very much listening to it and I wish you the very best with all of your writing. Patricia .
Comment Written 16-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine nature write about the leaves falling and I wonder which trees have silver leaves in your park? A fun post and I enjoyed your fine rhymes.
Suggestion for the sake of metre:
they quiver (and) quake.
Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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A fine nature write about the leaves falling and I wonder which trees have silver leaves in your park? A fun post and I enjoyed your fine rhymes.
Suggestion for the sake of metre:
they quiver (and) quake.
Love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much!
Comment from zaraduck6
This poem was so brilliantly written! It had a great word choice and lots of amazing literary devices. Your choice of green backdrop as well as the imagery chosen really add to the feeling of the poem. Well done!
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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This poem was so brilliantly written! It had a great word choice and lots of amazing literary devices. Your choice of green backdrop as well as the imagery chosen really add to the feeling of the poem. Well done!
Comment Written 16-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much for your kind review.
Comment from jessizero
This poem was lovely! I loved your rhymes and rhyme scheme especially. You painted a beautiful mental image of silver leaves. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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This poem was lovely! I loved your rhymes and rhyme scheme especially. You painted a beautiful mental image of silver leaves. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is a great poem. You use many sensory words and I can sense the movement. This was fun to read and the image you chose supports your words.Thank you for sharing.
Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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This is a great poem. You use many sensory words and I can sense the movement. This was fun to read and the image you chose supports your words.Thank you for sharing.
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 16-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much for your kind words. I appreciate it!