Collection of a Lifetime
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Heat Wave"a collection of poetry and experience
5 total reviews
Comment from Pamusart
Hi, gansach
I love the artwork you have paired your poem with. Very striking.
It took me awhile to understand the first two stanzas. I kept looking for a subject to go sit somewhere. It took me a while to realize that the subject was the viewer. The viewer is being told to sit and enjoy the scenery. So that's very nice.
I liked your rhyming pattern. It flowed well.. There weren't any forced rhymes and It had beautiful imagery
I really loved reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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Hi, gansach
I love the artwork you have paired your poem with. Very striking.
It took me awhile to understand the first two stanzas. I kept looking for a subject to go sit somewhere. It took me a while to realize that the subject was the viewer. The viewer is being told to sit and enjoy the scenery. So that's very nice.
I liked your rhyming pattern. It flowed well.. There weren't any forced rhymes and It had beautiful imagery
I really loved reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much!
Comment from royowen
An excellent rhyming poem, a very good post, it's a great work and methodically articulate post, it flowed to perfection, which made it an excellent precious to read out loud, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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An excellent rhyming poem, a very good post, it's a great work and methodically articulate post, it flowed to perfection, which made it an excellent precious to read out loud, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 16-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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Thank you so very much!
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Most welcome
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very nicely written for him about the seasons, and I enjoyed very much listening to it. It flows very well when it is read aloud. I only have one request of you and that would be that you make your text a bit darker so it would be, easier for people with vision problems to read. But it is beautifully presented. Patricia .
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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This is a very nicely written for him about the seasons, and I enjoyed very much listening to it. It flows very well when it is read aloud. I only have one request of you and that would be that you make your text a bit darker so it would be, easier for people with vision problems to read. But it is beautifully presented. Patricia .
Comment Written 16-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much, Patricia. I'll keep that in mind.
Comment from jessizero
I enjoyed this relaxing poem and its rhymes. I also liked that you repeated that first stanza. Thank you so much for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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I enjoyed this relaxing poem and its rhymes. I also liked that you repeated that first stanza. Thank you so much for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Shanbreen
Nicely written, gansach. Your description made me lower the A/C temperature, Love the artwork. Very appropriate-- a fountain that has no water flowing. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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Nicely written, gansach. Your description made me lower the A/C temperature, Love the artwork. Very appropriate-- a fountain that has no water flowing. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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Thanks so much!