Oh Come On
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Comment from wilkswrites
This was so fun to read. It is the second one that I've read this week that pokes fun at Ai. It would be a scary shame if that is actually where we are headed.
You manage to keep your reader interested from top to bottom. I was eager to get through to see what happens next.
Great job. I could see this in a commercial about privacy in the workplace or the invasion of Ai. -- Too funny.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024
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This was so fun to read. It is the second one that I've read this week that pokes fun at Ai. It would be a scary shame if that is actually where we are headed.
You manage to keep your reader interested from top to bottom. I was eager to get through to see what happens next.
Great job. I could see this in a commercial about privacy in the workplace or the invasion of Ai. -- Too funny.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much ?
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Hah! A self-checkout from Hell! I don't think I'd ever shop again, paranoid that they were all going to be mocking me. This is great fun! The dialogue is excellent, building up to your hilarious finale! I'm never going to hear that song in its original form again! Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024
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Hah! A self-checkout from Hell! I don't think I'd ever shop again, paranoid that they were all going to be mocking me. This is great fun! The dialogue is excellent, building up to your hilarious finale! I'm never going to hear that song in its original form again! Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 14-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Debbie. I always appreciate your reviews.
Cheers.
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
Hahaha, OUCH, hurts so good to laugh, ribs still sore, but you did get me to laugh. Thank you so much for that. But that is why I came back here. To review something else, but loved this!
Now, at the risk of sounding really naive, is there a self checkout that does that?
I haven't been in a store in so many years that I don't know.
All I know is I don't put anything past that dang Al. I hate that thing so bad. I will not let anything that has that feature help me.
So with that being said, I hope this is complete fiction, and there is not a self check out like that, but for the sake of the story, OMGosh this was cute. So funny and I loved that all of the items were perfect for smart remarks. Duh, I suppose you picked those on purpose, JK, I knew that. But it was so much fun.
Thanks for the awesome story. I have been saving that last six for you all week since I used five of them on Sunday. Take care dear friend and thanks for the laughs tonight. Like only a little brother could do. LOL... love, Debi
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024
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Hahaha, OUCH, hurts so good to laugh, ribs still sore, but you did get me to laugh. Thank you so much for that. But that is why I came back here. To review something else, but loved this!
Now, at the risk of sounding really naive, is there a self checkout that does that?
I haven't been in a store in so many years that I don't know.
All I know is I don't put anything past that dang Al. I hate that thing so bad. I will not let anything that has that feature help me.
So with that being said, I hope this is complete fiction, and there is not a self check out like that, but for the sake of the story, OMGosh this was cute. So funny and I loved that all of the items were perfect for smart remarks. Duh, I suppose you picked those on purpose, JK, I knew that. But it was so much fun.
Thanks for the awesome story. I have been saving that last six for you all week since I used five of them on Sunday. Take care dear friend and thanks for the laughs tonight. Like only a little brother could do. LOL... love, Debi
Comment Written 13-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024
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Thanks again? see PM response!
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Checking You Out writer's prompt. Very humorous take on the writing assignment. The way the world is going this might a real possibility. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
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An excellent entry for the Checking You Out writer's prompt. Very humorous take on the writing assignment. The way the world is going this might a real possibility. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Marilyn.
Always appreciated!
Comment from royowen
Heh heh, Just love it, I heard on the news this morning there's an investigation into the use of AI, heh heh, perhaps they've read your post, heh heh, beautifully written, my friend, great entry, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
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Heh heh, Just love it, I heard on the news this morning there's an investigation into the use of AI, heh heh, perhaps they've read your post, heh heh, beautifully written, my friend, great entry, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 13-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Roy on this fantastic review!
Cheers,
John
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Thank you John
Comment from Teri7
This is just too comical, but with the self check out happening we never know how things will turn out. You used great descriptive and fun words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
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This is just too comical, but with the self check out happening we never know how things will turn out. You used great descriptive and fun words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 13-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much Teri. Your encouraging words made smile?
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You are so welcome!!!
Comment from jessizero
This AI checkout was definitely kind of an ass. I felt so bad for your main character. You told the story very well. It was quite amusing. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
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This AI checkout was definitely kind of an ass. I felt so bad for your main character. You told the story very well. It was quite amusing. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much.