Silent Voices
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "Stages"Verses of personification
38 total reviews
Comment from EeanBlack
We go through these stages so often over the years sometimes we don't even recognize them. The loss of anything can trigger grief. The time spent in each stage is different for all and can overlap with multiple traumas. I love how you expressed each one.
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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We go through these stages so often over the years sometimes we don't even recognize them. The loss of anything can trigger grief. The time spent in each stage is different for all and can overlap with multiple traumas. I love how you expressed each one.
Comment Written 26-May-2024
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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Thank you so much! Xo
Comment from playinaround
So heavy yet echoes in my soul. I really think you did a great job describing grief. I like the originality of this poem. How painful and so well described
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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So heavy yet echoes in my soul. I really think you did a great job describing grief. I like the originality of this poem. How painful and so well described
Comment Written 24-May-2024
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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This review means the world, truly. Thank you so much! Xo
Comment from Tina Crute
If I had a six, it'd be yours.
I liked the structure of the poem. The reader can focus on one stage at a time. The personification of th stages and their affect on the person is very effective. To make grief living and breathing while a loss is experienced, turns the tables and expresses each stage perfectly.
Tina
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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If I had a six, it'd be yours.
I liked the structure of the poem. The reader can focus on one stage at a time. The personification of th stages and their affect on the person is very effective. To make grief living and breathing while a loss is experienced, turns the tables and expresses each stage perfectly.
Tina
Comment Written 24-May-2024
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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Tina, thank you for this wonderful review!
Xo
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You're welcome, Jessica!
Comment from E.P. Mackey
Wow, just absolutely powerful writing here. Every word I read hit me like a gut-punch. There is not one word that is misplaced in this. Thank you for sharing such a poignant poem, would love to read more from you :)
reply by the author on 17-May-2024
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Wow, just absolutely powerful writing here. Every word I read hit me like a gut-punch. There is not one word that is misplaced in this. Thank you for sharing such a poignant poem, would love to read more from you :)
Comment Written 15-May-2024
reply by the author on 17-May-2024
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This means so much to me, thank you!
Xo
Jess
Comment from bonespur
Great job with your description of each of the five stages of grief. The way you personified each really brought them to life allowing the reader to experience each stage in their own interpretation. Keep up the good work and good luck in the contest. Have a great day.
reply by the author on 17-May-2024
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Great job with your description of each of the five stages of grief. The way you personified each really brought them to life allowing the reader to experience each stage in their own interpretation. Keep up the good work and good luck in the contest. Have a great day.
Comment Written 13-May-2024
reply by the author on 17-May-2024
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Thank you so much!
Xo
Comment from marthag1
This poem delves deep into the human experience, exploring your journey through denial, anger, bargaining, depression, and finally, acceptance with vivid imagery and raw emotion. Overall, your poem is a powerful testament to the resilience of the human spirit and the transformative power of acceptance.
reply by the author on 17-May-2024
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This poem delves deep into the human experience, exploring your journey through denial, anger, bargaining, depression, and finally, acceptance with vivid imagery and raw emotion. Overall, your poem is a powerful testament to the resilience of the human spirit and the transformative power of acceptance.
Comment Written 13-May-2024
reply by the author on 17-May-2024
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Thank you for your thorough and insightful words!!
Xo
Jess
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent poem about the five stages of grief. You described them well. I have experience them so I can relate.
I like the presentation too.
Maybe you can add a crises life line number for suicide prevention or other mental illness. # 988
reply by the author on 09-May-2024
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Excellent poem about the five stages of grief. You described them well. I have experience them so I can relate.
I like the presentation too.
Maybe you can add a crises life line number for suicide prevention or other mental illness. # 988
Comment Written 08-May-2024
reply by the author on 09-May-2024
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Thank you so much, Gypsy. That's a great idea!
Xoxo
Comment from allison lammert
This was so moving and so real. I gave seen many people in different stages as part of my job and have personally experienced my daughter actually go through this as crazy as it sounds with her daddy leaving for a time. I felt "tossing coins in an overflowing well and watching my wishes spill out" it's so powerful. I'm new to this site but have become obsessed. This was an amazing way to start my morning. Thank you
reply by the author on 08-May-2024
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This was so moving and so real. I gave seen many people in different stages as part of my job and have personally experienced my daughter actually go through this as crazy as it sounds with her daddy leaving for a time. I felt "tossing coins in an overflowing well and watching my wishes spill out" it's so powerful. I'm new to this site but have become obsessed. This was an amazing way to start my morning. Thank you
Comment Written 08-May-2024
reply by the author on 08-May-2024
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allison, I am so touched by your kind words and wonderful review. I'm very sorry to hear you watched your daughter go through a similar experience- and it doesn't sound crazy at all! I hope she's ok and through the tough times. Xoxo
Welcome to the site! I can't wait to read you! :)
Jess
Comment from Natureschild
Hi Jessica, you have captured the complex emotions and experiences, associated with each phase of grief in this beautifully written poem. It offers a raw and honest portrayal of grief's journey adding depth to the narrative. The use of metaphors evokes strong imagery and emotion. I enjoyed reading it. - Terry
reply by the author on 09-May-2024
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Hi Jessica, you have captured the complex emotions and experiences, associated with each phase of grief in this beautifully written poem. It offers a raw and honest portrayal of grief's journey adding depth to the narrative. The use of metaphors evokes strong imagery and emotion. I enjoyed reading it. - Terry
Comment Written 08-May-2024
reply by the author on 09-May-2024
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Terry, thank you so much for your lovely and insightful review!! I truly appreciate it! Xo
Comment from jake cosmos aller
A powerful and moving poem about dealing with the death following the classic stages of grief personified. the poem touches on the deep feeling that the lost of a love one entails and how difficult it is to overcome it.
reply by the author on 09-May-2024
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A powerful and moving poem about dealing with the death following the classic stages of grief personified. the poem touches on the deep feeling that the lost of a love one entails and how difficult it is to overcome it.
Comment Written 07-May-2024
reply by the author on 09-May-2024
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Thanks so much, Jake!