Loss of Loved Ones
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Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
This is a nicely written note. The matting made my eyes bug out. Why did you choose bright yellow? A beige or soft gray would have made your poetry more calming. My opinion only. Good writing. Karen
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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This is a nicely written note. The matting made my eyes bug out. Why did you choose bright yellow? A beige or soft gray would have made your poetry more calming. My opinion only. Good writing. Karen
Comment Written 10-May-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Yes, yellow might be too strong. Thanks for reading and enjoying.Elaine
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I fear the yellow will put people off. Karen
Comment from royowen
It would be nice to be able to talk with my father, mother, and sibling, in fact my grandparents, I didn't know a great deal about them most were dead while I was quite young, a wonderful post dear friend, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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It would be nice to be able to talk with my father, mother, and sibling, in fact my grandparents, I didn't know a great deal about them most were dead while I was quite young, a wonderful post dear friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 08-May-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your kind words. Elaine
Comment from Madeleine Mardis
mermaids, this a such a beautiful treasure chest of beautiful thoughts put into sincere blessed words! Such harmony! You really wrote exactly what is in my heart! And what heavenly advice! Maddy
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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mermaids, this a such a beautiful treasure chest of beautiful thoughts put into sincere blessed words! Such harmony! You really wrote exactly what is in my heart! And what heavenly advice! Maddy
Comment Written 08-May-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Thank you for a generous amount of stars. I am honored. Elaine
Comment from kahpot
Yes, our past loved ones will never be forgotten, as we do think about them often, there are so many things that continuously remind us of them, very well written****kahpot
reply by the author on 08-May-2024
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Yes, our past loved ones will never be forgotten, as we do think about them often, there are so many things that continuously remind us of them, very well written****kahpot
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 08-May-2024
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Thank you for taking time to read and your understanding of my words. Elaine
Comment from Sanku
They are always in our minds .The many memories we share keeps them alive .That is why we keep dreaming about them ,It was a well thought out theme and the short lines added to reading pleasure..
reply by the author on 08-May-2024
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They are always in our minds .The many memories we share keeps them alive .That is why we keep dreaming about them ,It was a well thought out theme and the short lines added to reading pleasure..
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 08-May-2024
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Thank you so much. Elaine
Comment from judiverse
So true. We do think about those loved ones who've passed on. In my case, I think of them every day. Your poem relates how they visit us in our dreams, and that's so true. Those thoughts of departed loved ones remind me of happy times we had at family gatherings and vacations. Beautifully expressed. judi
reply by the author on 08-May-2024
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So true. We do think about those loved ones who've passed on. In my case, I think of them every day. Your poem relates how they visit us in our dreams, and that's so true. Those thoughts of departed loved ones remind me of happy times we had at family gatherings and vacations. Beautifully expressed. judi
Comment Written 23-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 08-May-2024
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Thank you for your encouraging words. Elaine
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You're very welcome. judi
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is an excellent well written poem about people who have passed. I could relate to this myself and others will too. I've has such realistic dreams about departs loved ones, that i have woken in tears with a soaken wet pillow. Your poem and image compliment each other well. Thank you for sharing.
Best wishes
Alex
reply by the author on 08-May-2024
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This is an excellent well written poem about people who have passed. I could relate to this myself and others will too. I've has such realistic dreams about departs loved ones, that i have woken in tears with a soaken wet pillow. Your poem and image compliment each other well. Thank you for sharing.
Best wishes
Alex
Comment Written 23-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 08-May-2024
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I am glad you can relate to my words. Thank you. Elaine
Comment from pome lover
That is really good. Beautiful and wise words, and your last verse, good advice.
I have just lost my sister. Sally Law has just lost her brother. Your words are comforting. Thank you,
Katharine
reply by the author on 08-May-2024
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That is really good. Beautiful and wise words, and your last verse, good advice.
I have just lost my sister. Sally Law has just lost her brother. Your words are comforting. Thank you,
Katharine
Comment Written 23-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 08-May-2024
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My condolences to you on the loss of your sister. Thank you for reading and understanding. Elaine
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thank you, Elaine.
Comment from LJbutterfly
This poem is reassuring and inspiring. It lets me know it's okay to think of my mother who passed away thirty years ago, and my sister who left me months ago. Your well-chosen words brings peace and serenity. Your artwork pairs perfectly and intensifies the message of your poem.
reply by the author on 08-May-2024
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This poem is reassuring and inspiring. It lets me know it's okay to think of my mother who passed away thirty years ago, and my sister who left me months ago. Your well-chosen words brings peace and serenity. Your artwork pairs perfectly and intensifies the message of your poem.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 08-May-2024
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Thank you for reading and understanding. There is no time limit on grief. Elaine