Silent Voices
Viewing comments for Prologue "She Lives"Verses of personification
32 total reviews
Comment from LoAnn Beery
I am happy to congratulate you on your April Artist award! I can see, indeed, why you have been named. The flow of your descriptive words is quite amazing, actually. There are no stops...or starts...between meaningful sentences. Congratulations, again....Blessings.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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I am happy to congratulate you on your April Artist award! I can see, indeed, why you have been named. The flow of your descriptive words is quite amazing, actually. There are no stops...or starts...between meaningful sentences. Congratulations, again....Blessings.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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LoAnn, I am so honored by your kind words and encouraging comments. Thank you so much.
Xo
Jessica
Comment from Jodi Ann Anderson
I love the way you personify poetry! You use very descriptive words in this and it has a beautiful flow. I really enjoyed reading this! Good luck in the contest!
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I love the way you personify poetry! You use very descriptive words in this and it has a beautiful flow. I really enjoyed reading this! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 08-Apr-2024
Comment from Sally Law
Ah, this is just so lovely of YOUR SOUL! I see you in all that you write, dear Jess.
Of special note:
She is mine.
My soul,
my spirit spilled.
The trailing ink
of my confessions.
She is the escape
and the light
that guides me home.
Magnificent offering for the book. Aching for a six to give today. A treasure.
Sending you my best today as always.
Sal XOs
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Ah, this is just so lovely of YOUR SOUL! I see you in all that you write, dear Jess.
Of special note:
She is mine.
My soul,
my spirit spilled.
The trailing ink
of my confessions.
She is the escape
and the light
that guides me home.
Magnificent offering for the book. Aching for a six to give today. A treasure.
Sending you my best today as always.
Sal XOs
Comment Written 08-Apr-2024
Comment from GWHARGIS
I wish I had a six because this surely deserves an extra star. I love the way the imagery takes me around the world and spans of colors and images seem to circle. She stitches the wounds she inflicts. That was an excellent line. Shows impulse and remorse dancing the tango. Great poem. Gretchen
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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I wish I had a six because this surely deserves an extra star. I love the way the imagery takes me around the world and spans of colors and images seem to circle. She stitches the wounds she inflicts. That was an excellent line. Shows impulse and remorse dancing the tango. Great poem. Gretchen
Comment Written 04-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much, Gretchen! Xo
Comment from Dr. Nad
THIS IS AN EXCELLENT POEM THAT SPEAKS TO THE MYSTERY OF THE HEART SOUL AND MIND AND CELEBRATES WHO YOU ARE, AND WHAT YOU THINK. This piece challenges us to believe in ourselves and Accept with gusto the challenges that life brings with its complexities. THANKS
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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THIS IS AN EXCELLENT POEM THAT SPEAKS TO THE MYSTERY OF THE HEART SOUL AND MIND AND CELEBRATES WHO YOU ARE, AND WHAT YOU THINK. This piece challenges us to believe in ourselves and Accept with gusto the challenges that life brings with its complexities. THANKS
Comment Written 04-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much!!! Xo
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You are most welcome!
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You are most welcome!
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is well written, inspiring, and relatable. You use descriptive and vivid imagery, that flows. I enjoyed reading your work, and your image presentation matches perfectly.
Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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This is well written, inspiring, and relatable. You use descriptive and vivid imagery, that flows. I enjoyed reading your work, and your image presentation matches perfectly.
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 04-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much, Alex!!! Xo
Comment from Ulla
Hi Jessica, I was really taken with your prologue poem for the NaPoWriMo contest. Your words are beautiful painting a beautiful imagery.
I especially like the stanza beginning: She is the bearer of unborn brilliance,
Very lyrical. Ullaxcx
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
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Hi Jessica, I was really taken with your prologue poem for the NaPoWriMo contest. Your words are beautiful painting a beautiful imagery.
I especially like the stanza beginning: She is the bearer of unborn brilliance,
Very lyrical. Ullaxcx
Comment Written 04-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much, Ulla! Xo
Comment from Wendy G
Very thoughtful, and thought-provoking, as well as being lyrical and descriptive. I like the alliteration, subtle and appropriate, and the last half is wonderful, showing the power of writing from one's heart and soul.
Wendy
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
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Very thoughtful, and thought-provoking, as well as being lyrical and descriptive. I like the alliteration, subtle and appropriate, and the last half is wonderful, showing the power of writing from one's heart and soul.
Wendy
Comment Written 04-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much, Wendy, for this wonderful and insightful review!!
Xo
Jess
Comment from ~Dovey
Hi Jessica!
You have done an excellent job with alliteration and consonance in this prologue to your NaPoWriMo project. I will enjoy reading your selections this month.
Good luck in the contest!
Kim
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
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Hi Jessica!
You have done an excellent job with alliteration and consonance in this prologue to your NaPoWriMo project. I will enjoy reading your selections this month.
Good luck in the contest!
Kim
Comment Written 04-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
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I appreciate that so much, Kim!
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
Very beautifully written. I love your choice of words. She is
the bearer
of unborn brilliance,
the mother
of preconceived craft,
the work of lyrical art
emerging
in the glimmer of dawn.
A masterpiece
draped in golden light.beautiful contest entry.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Very beautifully written. I love your choice of words. She is
the bearer
of unborn brilliance,
the mother
of preconceived craft,
the work of lyrical art
emerging
in the glimmer of dawn.
A masterpiece
draped in golden light.beautiful contest entry.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much, Joanne!!! Xo
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Your welcome