Comment from LoAnn Beery

Excellent

This is beautifully written and put together in one beautiful thought.That is hard to do, because our wording usually wants to separate into the parts that made your Senryu.

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024

Thank you so very much

Comment from Brenda Strauser

Excellent

I really enjoyed reading this poem. The words are beautiful. The picture is so pretty and goes well with the words. I also like tge way you did the coliring. Great job

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024

Thank you so very much

reply by Brenda Strauser on 04-Mar-2024

Sorry about the spelling errors

Comment from hassan nasrallah

Excellent

The poem succinctly captures the essence of faith and reassurance in the face of life's uncertainties. The simplicity of the language adds to its profound impact, emphasizing the profound connection between human touch and spiritual guidance.

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024

Thank you so very much

Comment from Baltimore Born

Excellent

This is a well=crafted Senryu poem. Your 5-7-5 syllable count is in good order. Each line connects well with the next. Your last line is very creative. Good accentuating picture. Nice job.

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024

Thank you very much

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Feeling supported and loved is a wonderful feeling and your faith gives you a good feeling and enjoyed your Senryu for the contest and wish you luck, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024

Thank you very much

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

This is a beautiful and well-described poem! You use vivid imagery and strong words. I enjoyed reviewing this, as will others. Well done. Have a good day!

Alex

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024

Thank you very much