Comment from tempeste

Exceptional

Ciao!

I should be sleeping but the rain is pouring and I want to keep the fireplace roaring.

It's not easy to write something fresh and never said before when it comes to short seasonal poems.

First off I see Korean still has distinct season .. lucky you.
Our seasons are in a shamble

I love autumn and those sunset hues are amazing .

I really like how you constructed your poem.

The words sandwiched and polar vortex stand out for me.

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024

thanks a lot

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

Great job. This beautifully captures the transition from summer to winter - with autumn in the way! I love how you share the extremes of hot and cold. I could use some how now! Great job with just three lines.

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024

thanks a lot appreciate it

Comment from zanya

Excellent

Interesting - then Autumn is a real and noticeable season of the year with these great extremes of temperature and change =enlightenment comes be being on a writing site !

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024

thanks