Love Doesn't Die
Love poem for deceased husband,34 total reviews
Comment from Jodi Ann Anderson
So, this poem was so good it gave me chills! It is so beautifully written. I love, "When death claimed you I thought my heart might break, but what I felt for you death couldn't take." And "Like candy hearts, the memories are sweet." You get all the stars from me, and congrats on your win!
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2024
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So, this poem was so good it gave me chills! It is so beautifully written. I love, "When death claimed you I thought my heart might break, but what I felt for you death couldn't take." And "Like candy hearts, the memories are sweet." You get all the stars from me, and congrats on your win!
Comment Written 19-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2024
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Thank you so for the wonderful review. I'm glad you told me the vese you like best. I'm especially pleased with the six stars.
Beth
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Your welcome! You deserve it!
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Beth,
This poem shows both your love for your husband and your faith.
I agree with you that I would like to relive the good and the bad times
with my husband again when he dies. Both help build the love you have.
Congrats on winning the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a great week.
Joan
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2024
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Hi Beth,
This poem shows both your love for your husband and your faith.
I agree with you that I would like to relive the good and the bad times
with my husband again when he dies. Both help build the love you have.
Congrats on winning the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a great week.
Joan
Comment Written 19-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2024
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Thank you Joan. I really appreciate you reviewing this poem. Thanks for the cangratulations and well wishes. I hope you have a good week as well.
Beth
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No problem, Beth,.
Joan
Comment from RFL
A heartfelt poem that filled me with emotion and admiration for the poet! Love doesn't die when one can no longer touch the object of love. The memories last as long as we live. Kudos to you! RFL
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2024
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A heartfelt poem that filled me with emotion and admiration for the poet! Love doesn't die when one can no longer touch the object of love. The memories last as long as we live. Kudos to you! RFL
Comment Written 19-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much reviewing this one. I'm so glad you liked it.
Beth
Comment from Boogienights
I'm sorry for your loss. This poem is a beautiful tribute to your husband and the love you shared. It rhymed so effortlessly and the sentiment was real. Congradulations on the win.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2024
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I'm sorry for your loss. This poem is a beautiful tribute to your husband and the love you shared. It rhymed so effortlessly and the sentiment was real. Congradulations on the win.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2024
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Thank you for review this and you words of condolance and congradulations. I appreciate them.
Beth
Comment from Contests
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2024
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 A contest winning entry! A seven star rating from the Contest Committee for posting the winning contest entry. |
Comment Written 19-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2024
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Thank you to the committee for the lovely seven star rating. I really appreciate all those stars.
Beth
Comment from Terry wrote
In our 6th decade together I lost my best friend, my husband, my true love. I'm now nearly finished hat would have been our 7th decade I also dream of the day when we will meet again. Some other place, some other time. Your poem brought so many of those thoughts back to me. Your meter is even, your rhyming is smooth. It strengthens my faith that there is a new future togther, ahead.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2024
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In our 6th decade together I lost my best friend, my husband, my true love. I'm now nearly finished hat would have been our 7th decade I also dream of the day when we will meet again. Some other place, some other time. Your poem brought so many of those thoughts back to me. Your meter is even, your rhyming is smooth. It strengthens my faith that there is a new future togther, ahead.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2024
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Thank you Terry. You had a really long time with your husband too. My has been gone since 2017, I glad I still have such wonderful memories of those years.
Beth
Comment from QC Poet
What a Beautiful Memory you Shared I wish we all could be joined together up above when our time comes. My wife and I are going to share our 44th Valentines together. When we met we went to her friends house one day and they had a painting on their living room roof that made me feel like I was there before Dejabo since then my wife who grew up in many places that were very close to where I lived insisted we were together in a previous life. Thank you for Sharing your Valentines poem and God Bless you for Sharing this personal Memory
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2024
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What a Beautiful Memory you Shared I wish we all could be joined together up above when our time comes. My wife and I are going to share our 44th Valentines together. When we met we went to her friends house one day and they had a painting on their living room roof that made me feel like I was there before Dejabo since then my wife who grew up in many places that were very close to where I lived insisted we were together in a previous life. Thank you for Sharing your Valentines poem and God Bless you for Sharing this personal Memory
Comment Written 14-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2024
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Thank you for a great review. There are a lot of people who believe we keep coming back and reconnecting with the same family members. But maybe with a diferent role. Personally I hope the next stage is not in the same on world that seems to get worst as it goes.
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
It's true love and I love that you got to experience it. My husband and I are the same way. I think I just love him more everyday. I have lunch with him at his work place every Wednesday and I absolutely love those lunches. You did a great job with this and know that you're not alone today. He's right here with you.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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It's true love and I love that you got to experience it. My husband and I are the same way. I think I just love him more everyday. I have lunch with him at his work place every Wednesday and I absolutely love those lunches. You did a great job with this and know that you're not alone today. He's right here with you.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much for the review and the six stars. I never feel alone and I talk to him all the time. I glad you and your husband have lunch dates. Everything you do together is a memory to cherish.
Beth
Comment from Ric Myworld
Yes, real love lasts forever, for the few who've ever actually felt it, or knew what it was when they found it. It's refreshing to know that it truly exists for those few. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
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Yes, real love lasts forever, for the few who've ever actually felt it, or knew what it was when they found it. It's refreshing to know that it truly exists for those few. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
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Thank you Ric. I had a good marriage and I do miss him but I still have a good life and I'm glad I have good memories.
Beth
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
What a wonderful poem you wrote about your life with your husband. I could feel the lasting love.
My thoughts were with my livelihood, also, when reading. Love will last forever even if there are disagreements that usually happens when married.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
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What a wonderful poem you wrote about your life with your husband. I could feel the lasting love.
My thoughts were with my livelihood, also, when reading. Love will last forever even if there are disagreements that usually happens when married.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
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I think might have been Billy Graham's wife who said "If we always agreed on everything, there would be no need for one of us." I'm so glad you liked my poem and I really appreciate the six stars.
Beth