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Viewing comments for Chapter 28 "Four kinds of Love in His Life"Spiritual
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Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Debi, your poem is a good look into the different types of love and how love grows and evolves throughout our life.
Your poem reads and flows well and has good sensory appeal.
Of special note:
Dear Mom, I will always love you
(There is nothing greater than a mother's love. It's that loves that shapes us into who we become.)
Great photo choice. Well done. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. Xo. M
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2023
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Hi Debi, your poem is a good look into the different types of love and how love grows and evolves throughout our life.
Your poem reads and flows well and has good sensory appeal.
Of special note:
Dear Mom, I will always love you
(There is nothing greater than a mother's love. It's that loves that shapes us into who we become.)
Great photo choice. Well done. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. Xo. M
Comment Written 15-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2023
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I am so glad you liked this one. It came in second but it was winner take all'.
Thanks for your kind words for it, sweetie!
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Four Kinds of Love in His Life, presented with four monorhyme quatrains, reminds the readers of our dear moms, first loves, spouses, and beautiful children.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
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This poem, Four Kinds of Love in His Life, presented with four monorhyme quatrains, reminds the readers of our dear moms, first loves, spouses, and beautiful children.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
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as alway, I am so appreciative of your kind reviews and words for this poem. Thank you so much!
Comment from June Sargent
This is a beautiful tribute to the different stages of love. Each is unique and play an important part in our progression through life. In the end they come full circle and begins all over again. Lovely sentiments!
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This is a beautiful tribute to the different stages of love. Each is unique and play an important part in our progression through life. In the end they come full circle and begins all over again. Lovely sentiments!
Comment Written 12-Sep-2023
Comment from Ginda Simpson
Love is beautiful and pure when it is new and blossoms as we mature. This expresses that love journey through the years and it captures it's very essence in its simplicity of expression.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
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Love is beautiful and pure when it is new and blossoms as we mature. This expresses that love journey through the years and it captures it's very essence in its simplicity of expression.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
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Ginda, as always, you are so sweet. I am so appreciative of your kind reviews and words. Thank you so much!
Comment from Emily Barrett
What a nice reflection on the types of love. I love that you were able to capture a fast pace in this poem. Each of these phases in life is a good chunk of time, but just seems to fly by. Well done. Good luck in the contest!
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What a nice reflection on the types of love. I love that you were able to capture a fast pace in this poem. Each of these phases in life is a good chunk of time, but just seems to fly by. Well done. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 12-Sep-2023
Comment from Mia Twysted
A wonderful journey to take the reader through. You showed a life with stages of love that ended in in the speaker becoming a parent. Show much love to be had.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
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A wonderful journey to take the reader through. You showed a life with stages of love that ended in in the speaker becoming a parent. Show much love to be had.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
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Thank you so very much, Mia. I appreciate the very kind comments. You are so awesome!
Comment from Wendy G
A very fine poem dealing with the various kinds of love we meet in our lives, and the tenderness of each.Very well written and nicely presented. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
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A very fine poem dealing with the various kinds of love we meet in our lives, and the tenderness of each.Very well written and nicely presented. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 12-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
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Wendy, you are so very kind and I thank you for the awesome review and comments. . It is all very much appreciated.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
You've shown us all the different stages of life and the different forms of love in this well written Monorhyme. Then, all too soon we get to see grandies come into our life. A lovely read. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
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You've shown us all the different stages of life and the different forms of love in this well written Monorhyme. Then, all too soon we get to see grandies come into our life. A lovely read. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
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Valda, you are so very kind and I thank you for the awesome review and comments. . It is all very much appreciated.
Comment from jmdg1954
I could not tell you what style poem this is as I go jot write poetry. What I can say is this poem is phenomenal.
It's a lifelong love poem, featuring an excellent cadence and rhyming scheme.
Nicely crafted, best of luck the contest.
Cheers to life of love..,
John
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
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I could not tell you what style poem this is as I go jot write poetry. What I can say is this poem is phenomenal.
It's a lifelong love poem, featuring an excellent cadence and rhyming scheme.
Nicely crafted, best of luck the contest.
Cheers to life of love..,
John
Comment Written 11-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
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John, you are so very kind and I thank you for the awesome review and comments. . It is all very much appreciated.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Isn't it amazing how long it seems for children to grow and then they are gone which has us confused where did all the time go.
Ours wedded three years ago and where they visited regularly in years one and two they don't stop in any longer
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
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Isn't it amazing how long it seems for children to grow and then they are gone which has us confused where did all the time go.
Ours wedded three years ago and where they visited regularly in years one and two they don't stop in any longer
Comment Written 11-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
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Tom, I know what you mean. They are too busy now. Good thing we weren't too busy at one time for them. Lol.
you are so very kind and I thank you for the awesome review and comments. . It is all very much appreciated.
