The Night I Died
A Dream of ...16 total reviews
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
lol This is an excellent story. I enjoyed reading it. Your entire presentation is good. You use descriptive words that draw in a reader and made him or her think.
Best wishes!
Alexandra
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2023
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lol This is an excellent story. I enjoyed reading it. Your entire presentation is good. You use descriptive words that draw in a reader and made him or her think.
Best wishes!
Alexandra
Comment Written 27-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2023
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Nice to hear from you again. I appreciate your comments. Thanks.
Comment from jessizero
I enjoyed this story of your dream. I sometimes dread what comes after death, so I see what you mean about hoping St Peter falls asleep on the job. Thanks for sharing this story! Best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2023
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I enjoyed this story of your dream. I sometimes dread what comes after death, so I see what you mean about hoping St Peter falls asleep on the job. Thanks for sharing this story! Best wishes to you.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2023
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Another thought ? besides Peter who else is a gatekeeper?
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I honestly have no idea. LOL
Comment from jenintorre
I was really enjoying your journey before you woke up and thinking hey I needn't worry to much if this is what It's like at the end. Your punch line was great. I didn't see that coming. Take care. Jen.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2023
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I was really enjoying your journey before you woke up and thinking hey I needn't worry to much if this is what It's like at the end. Your punch line was great. I didn't see that coming. Take care. Jen.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2023
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Don?t know if I recall having you visit previously but I appreciate it.
WARNING: many of my posts are satirically based with enigmatic humor. 😜
Comment from Wendy G
A pleasing dream in poetic prose with subtle rhyme. It flowed nicely and effectively. Now one or other of you will be right about your final destination. Here's hoping it's you. Your passing was very serene and uncomplicated. Your photograph is truly stunning. Looks like an amazing place to live.
Wendy
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2023
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A pleasing dream in poetic prose with subtle rhyme. It flowed nicely and effectively. Now one or other of you will be right about your final destination. Here's hoping it's you. Your passing was very serene and uncomplicated. Your photograph is truly stunning. Looks like an amazing place to live.
Wendy
Comment Written 27-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2023
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Nevertheless is, and it was free! Given to Myra and I by her paw, Sixty-seven acres, part of 180 acres divided and saved for her brother and sister. We have been blessed.
Comment from kahpot
What a wonderful dream, as if your passing is/was so very peaceful, I love the flow of this read with the alliteration through out and the rhyme, very well written, gorgeous place to live****kahpot
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023
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What a wonderful dream, as if your passing is/was so very peaceful, I love the flow of this read with the alliteration through out and the rhyme, very well written, gorgeous place to live****kahpot
Comment Written 26-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023
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Thank you
I/we have been blessed and never forget it
Thanks for the review
Comment from LJbutterfly
Your words flowed rhythmically with detailed descriptions that put me in the dream seeing what you saw. I liked the idea of golden roads and people neither young or old. It sounds biblically possible. Sorry your wife woke you, but glad she woke up from HER dream. Beautiful photograph.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023
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Your words flowed rhythmically with detailed descriptions that put me in the dream seeing what you saw. I liked the idea of golden roads and people neither young or old. It sounds biblically possible. Sorry your wife woke you, but glad she woke up from HER dream. Beautiful photograph.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023
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Yes
It was well she awoke as she later said as I was dreamin being in heaven she dreaming I was headed ? elsewhere 😜
Comment from royowen
Well fancy that, the dream your wife was having was the counter to your dream would be quite disturbing, how amazing, but I see it was actually fiction, so I'm glad heh heh, great story though, well done, blessings Roy
Typo : (Awoken) me fully, awakened? 2: A dream she had awakened (her) to...
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023
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Well fancy that, the dream your wife was having was the counter to your dream would be quite disturbing, how amazing, but I see it was actually fiction, so I'm glad heh heh, great story though, well done, blessings Roy
Typo : (Awoken) me fully, awakened? 2: A dream she had awakened (her) to...
Comment Written 26-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023
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It was well she awoke as The wife later said as I was dreamin being in heaven she dreaming I was headed ? elsewhere 😜
Yes fiction
What R u saying about awakened/awoken?
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I think I got it
Check it out please
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Awoken seems so a very awkward word, awakened sounds so much better. It poetically grates Tom,
Comment from Bruce Carrington
Approaching a pearly gate I began to slow and hesitate til I saw Peter, supposedly guarding the gate, fast asleep. I wouldn't want to face his fate for letting me pass through without I.D.
Terrific, Tom. Absolutely beautiful. Sad and calm
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023
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Approaching a pearly gate I began to slow and hesitate til I saw Peter, supposedly guarding the gate, fast asleep. I wouldn't want to face his fate for letting me pass through without I.D.
Terrific, Tom. Absolutely beautiful. Sad and calm
Comment Written 26-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023
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Thank you for the extra star
Comment from Mary Vigasin
I have to give you a six for this. It is fun, creative, and brilliant. I see the irony here.. You in heaven and your wife in hell? Role reversal.
Well, you can dream about getting to heaven, can't you?
Best wishes,
Mary
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023
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I have to give you a six for this. It is fun, creative, and brilliant. I see the irony here.. You in heaven and your wife in hell? Role reversal.
Well, you can dream about getting to heaven, can't you?
Best wishes,
Mary
Comment Written 26-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023
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Unless, I change Satan will reserve me a cell rather than the mansion promised by the good Guy.
Comment from Teri7
Tom, This is a very good post about a dream you had. You used very good descriptive words. I love the picture you used where you live. That has to be a beautiful and peaceful place to live. I love to see lightning bugs and hear the crickets chirp here also, but we don't live on a place like that. Thank you for sharing! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023
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Tom, This is a very good post about a dream you had. You used very good descriptive words. I love the picture you used where you live. That has to be a beautiful and peaceful place to live. I love to see lightning bugs and hear the crickets chirp here also, but we don't live on a place like that. Thank you for sharing! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 26-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023
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Visitors are welcomed
Great review
Earns you a nomination if available
Thanks
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You are so welcome my friend!