My Mother's Day Gift
To Mother18 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I think this is a lovely little verse, compact and sincere and beautifully presented. The verse flows well with a good rhyming pattern. You've hit the spot here and have my vote. Thanks and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 14-May-2023
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I think this is a lovely little verse, compact and sincere and beautifully presented. The verse flows well with a good rhyming pattern. You've hit the spot here and have my vote. Thanks and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 14-May-2023
reply by the author on 14-May-2023
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Thank you for your kind review and especially for your vote.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
What a beautiful poem and also image. We love our mamas so much. We try to treat them with kindness always. Without their love and care, when we were a child, it would have been trying. They are constantly there when we need them.
reply by the author on 14-May-2023
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What a beautiful poem and also image. We love our mamas so much. We try to treat them with kindness always. Without their love and care, when we were a child, it would have been trying. They are constantly there when we need them.
Comment Written 13-May-2023
reply by the author on 14-May-2023
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You're so right. After all, what we get from our mothers become a part of us and make us who we are. What a precious gift. Thank you for your kind words.
Comment from Mario PIERRE
Very touching and sad poem. It brings up the deep feelings of nostalgia and tenderness for your mother. I really liked the way you wrote it.
Best of luck!!
reply by the author on 13-May-2023
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Very touching and sad poem. It brings up the deep feelings of nostalgia and tenderness for your mother. I really liked the way you wrote it.
Best of luck!!
Comment Written 13-May-2023
reply by the author on 13-May-2023
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your kind comments and best wishes.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Lovely image and nice presentation.
-I am sorry you lost your mother.
I lost mine when she was in her early 70's.
-You wrote a very good tribute to her,
and I think she would be pleased.
-I like the style of your poem, the flow,
imagery, and rhyme.
-You do a good job showing the qualities
she had and how they have passed down to you.
-A very good concluding line.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-May-2023
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-Lovely image and nice presentation.
-I am sorry you lost your mother.
I lost mine when she was in her early 70's.
-You wrote a very good tribute to her,
and I think she would be pleased.
-I like the style of your poem, the flow,
imagery, and rhyme.
-You do a good job showing the qualities
she had and how they have passed down to you.
-A very good concluding line.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-May-2023
reply by the author on 13-May-2023
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Thank you, Pam. Your comment that my mother would be pleased is especially touching and appreciated.
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You are very welcome, and I am glad you found the comment meaningful.
Comment from MissMerri
I could find no way to improve this beautiful, loving poem for a mom no longer able to read it, but obviously so heartfelt and pure. The love does not stop with the stilled heart of one so loved. Very beautifully expressed.
reply by the author on 13-May-2023
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I could find no way to improve this beautiful, loving poem for a mom no longer able to read it, but obviously so heartfelt and pure. The love does not stop with the stilled heart of one so loved. Very beautifully expressed.
Comment Written 13-May-2023
reply by the author on 13-May-2023
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Thank you for your most touching review and especially the sixth star.
Comment from Ginda Simpson
What a lovely tribute you have written for and about your mother. She was your inspiration for these heartfelt words. No wonder you miss her so. She would be proud.
reply by the author on 12-May-2023
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What a lovely tribute you have written for and about your mother. She was your inspiration for these heartfelt words. No wonder you miss her so. She would be proud.
Comment Written 12-May-2023
reply by the author on 12-May-2023
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Thank you for your review. I appreciate your kind and encouraging words.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This poem is endearing, loving and kind and skilfully written in perfect metre and rhyme, a joy to read a poem so perfectly formed, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 12-May-2023
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This poem is endearing, loving and kind and skilfully written in perfect metre and rhyme, a joy to read a poem so perfectly formed, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-May-2023
reply by the author on 12-May-2023
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Thank you for your review. I appreciate your generous and complimentary comments.
Comment from harmony13
This is a beautiful poem. The author's words are filled with love, gratitude, and so much more. I found the words written in this poem came straight from the heart. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is lovely and compliments the theme and words of this poem.
Have a great weekend!....Maria
reply by the author on 12-May-2023
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This is a beautiful poem. The author's words are filled with love, gratitude, and so much more. I found the words written in this poem came straight from the heart. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is lovely and compliments the theme and words of this poem.
Have a great weekend!....Maria
Comment Written 12-May-2023
reply by the author on 12-May-2023
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Thank you, Maria. You are much too gracious, and I'm humbly grateful for your comments and review. Blessings to you.
Comment from royowen
My mother has been gone for ten years now. The trouble is one thinks their parent are gong to live forever, which of course, is simply no true, but they still leave a hole, impossible to fill, this is beautifully written.my friend, an excellent post, blessings and good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 12-May-2023
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My mother has been gone for ten years now. The trouble is one thinks their parent are gong to live forever, which of course, is simply no true, but they still leave a hole, impossible to fill, this is beautifully written.my friend, an excellent post, blessings and good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 12-May-2023
reply by the author on 12-May-2023
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You are so right. We always think our parents are somehow immortal; and when they're not, it's devastating. Thank you for your review and best wishes.
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Well done
Comment from Wendy G
Very beautiful poem to celebrate your lovely and loving mother. It flows smoothly and well with excellent rhyme and metre. Sending you best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 12-May-2023
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Very beautiful poem to celebrate your lovely and loving mother. It flows smoothly and well with excellent rhyme and metre. Sending you best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 12-May-2023
reply by the author on 12-May-2023
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Thank you for your review and best wishes.