A Cat Tale
75 word flash fiction story15 total reviews
Comment from LJbutterfly
This story is imaginative and enjoyable. Your background information is well developed as well as your descriptions. I like that you made Ryan smart, bold, and not afraid of the gunslinger cat. Great flash fiction. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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This story is imaginative and enjoyable. Your background information is well developed as well as your descriptions. I like that you made Ryan smart, bold, and not afraid of the gunslinger cat. Great flash fiction. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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Thank you for such a nice review.
Comment from Bill Schott
This seventy-five-word story, A Cat Tale, has the proper word count and has exposed a most abusive form of PUNishment. I wonder if wildcats have nine lives as well?
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
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This seventy-five-word story, A Cat Tale, has the proper word count and has exposed a most abusive form of PUNishment. I wonder if wildcats have nine lives as well?
Comment Written 28-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
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LOL. Thank you for reviewing. I think wildcats only have one life, but they have figured out nine ways to jump out of life-threatening situations. Your reply reminds me as well, I ought to sponsor another O-pun contest.
Comment from Ulla
Hahaha, I loved this. I didn't know what to expect, but your ending me ade me laugh out loud. I just love it. I wish you all the best in the contest with this one. All best, Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
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Hahaha, I loved this. I didn't know what to expect, but your ending me ade me laugh out loud. I just love it. I wish you all the best in the contest with this one. All best, Ulla:)))
Comment Written 28-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for your kind and enthusiastic review.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Cute story. Cats must be like dogs; they mark their surroundings to keep their property safe. The cat in the image looks like a wild cat who I would not like to meet on any outing.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
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Cute story. Cats must be like dogs; they mark their surroundings to keep their property safe. The cat in the image looks like a wild cat who I would not like to meet on any outing.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
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Yes, that photo looks like a true wild cat, wilder than our feral one. Thank you for your line of 5 stars!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Haha, what a fun story, CC. I enjoyed reading it.
I liked the personification of the kitty. I could see
Ryan acting just as you wrote. I liked the use of
the word desperado and copycat. I wouldn't want
to be on his bad side.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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Haha, what a fun story, CC. I enjoyed reading it.
I liked the personification of the kitty. I could see
Ryan acting just as you wrote. I liked the use of
the word desperado and copycat. I wouldn't want
to be on his bad side.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 27-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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Thank you for reviewing and your five stars, so very much appreciated.
Comment from mermaids
You have a clever use of words that brings a smile to the reader's face. Cats are smart and like your feral cat, I can see your cat in the story taking charge. This is a fun feline tale.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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You have a clever use of words that brings a smile to the reader's face. Cats are smart and like your feral cat, I can see your cat in the story taking charge. This is a fun feline tale.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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Thank you for your kind review!
Comment from nancy_e_davis
This is funny and original Crystie. Cats do a lot of guarding and protecting. Most people don't understand that. They keep down rodents and insects and skunks that would foul up our space. I hate it when someone hates cats. They were the saviors of mankind during the Black Plague! Feed your Sheriff
good and give him a spot in the barn for a bed and he will stand guard. Well done. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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This is funny and original Crystie. Cats do a lot of guarding and protecting. Most people don't understand that. They keep down rodents and insects and skunks that would foul up our space. I hate it when someone hates cats. They were the saviors of mankind during the Black Plague! Feed your Sheriff
good and give him a spot in the barn for a bed and he will stand guard. Well done. Nancy:)
Comment Written 27-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. He gets fed well.
Comment from Jesse James Doty
What a punchline! I love the surprise ending to this 75-word flash fiction tale! This is fun and I enjoyed reading it immensely. The plot of a cat gunslinger coming to town and taking on the cat sheriff is hilarious! I laughed out loud when I read this.
Thank you for brightening up my day!
Jesse
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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What a punchline! I love the surprise ending to this 75-word flash fiction tale! This is fun and I enjoyed reading it immensely. The plot of a cat gunslinger coming to town and taking on the cat sheriff is hilarious! I laughed out loud when I read this.
Thank you for brightening up my day!
Jesse
Comment Written 27-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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Thank you very very much for an enthusiastic review!
Comment from patcelaw
This is a delightful flash fiction story. I enjoyed it, and I did give me a chuckle at the end. I wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a wonderful day, and God bless. Patricia.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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This is a delightful flash fiction story. I enjoyed it, and I did give me a chuckle at the end. I wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a wonderful day, and God bless. Patricia.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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Thank you for stopping by and your fun review.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I was caught in an eddy's whirling dervish trying to figure what you were writing about. Human or feline, and isn't, "He was an ambitious feline" an oxymoron?
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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I was caught in an eddy's whirling dervish trying to figure what you were writing about. Human or feline, and isn't, "He was an ambitious feline" an oxymoron?
Comment Written 27-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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Thank you for stopping to review. We actually have a feral cat who is pretty ambitious about serving as a guard cat.