Nightfall
We don't always end up with the one we want.51 total reviews
Comment from Ulla
It's a lovely story and I agree with you, some stories of just have to be written, and this is definitely one of them. He looked out for her but in the end he had to let go. A lovely ending. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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It's a lovely story and I agree with you, some stories of just have to be written, and this is definitely one of them. He looked out for her but in the end he had to let go. A lovely ending. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 27-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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Thank you for reading and reviewing, Ulla. I appreciate it and your feedback. I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. It's one of my personal favorites. Thank you again for reading. Take care. :D :D
Comment from Sanku
Well written account of a lost love from a dead person .he is generous enough to wish them well .His hovering around her to watch her and seeing the two unite wa sad but then it has to happen .Life has to go on...
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2023
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Well written account of a lost love from a dead person .he is generous enough to wish them well .His hovering around her to watch her and seeing the two unite wa sad but then it has to happen .Life has to go on...
Comment Written 27-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2023
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate it and your feedback. I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. It's one of my personal favorites. Thank you again for reading. Take care. :D :D
Comment from Wendy G
It was a gripping and enthralling read, with elements of love, loss, guilt, grief, forgiveness, along wth some supernatural elements. Excellent writing. Sorry not to have a six for you.
Wendy
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2023
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It was a gripping and enthralling read, with elements of love, loss, guilt, grief, forgiveness, along wth some supernatural elements. Excellent writing. Sorry not to have a six for you.
Wendy
Comment Written 26-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2023
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Thank you for reading and reviewing, Wendy. I appreciate it and your feedback. I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. This was one of my personal favorites. Thank you again for reading. Take care. :D :D
Comment from Rebecca Roberts1
I enjoyed this read, and yes, it was sad.
But you did a wonderful job with the story flow. You kept me glued until the end. It makes me think of "Ghost" the movie.
Nice job.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2023
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I enjoyed this read, and yes, it was sad.
But you did a wonderful job with the story flow. You kept me glued until the end. It makes me think of "Ghost" the movie.
Nice job.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2023
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. It's one of my personal favorites. Lol. Yes, it does remind me of that movie, too. What a coincidence! Thank you again for reading. Take care. :D :D
Comment from eliz100
I so enjoyed reading your story. Your way with words is wonderful and your storytelling is superb. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2023
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I so enjoyed reading your story. Your way with words is wonderful and your storytelling is superb. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2023
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate it and your feedback. I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. It's one of my personal favorites. Thank you again for reading. Take care. :D :D
Comment from Rachel Jamerson1
Awesome story! Sorry, I don't have any more 6 stars - you deserve one. The story is a page-turner - One that will hold the interest of the reader and they will also share the emotions of the characters. Thank you for sharing your talent!
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2023
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Awesome story! Sorry, I don't have any more 6 stars - you deserve one. The story is a page-turner - One that will hold the interest of the reader and they will also share the emotions of the characters. Thank you for sharing your talent!
Comment Written 26-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2023
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate it and your feedback. I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. It's one of my personal favorites. Thank you again for reading. Take care. :D :D
Comment from amahra
I really enjoyed this story. If this were in a book, I'd have to say I couldn't put the book down. It was very engaging, realistic, and sweet. First, he resented the guy, then realized he just wanted her to be happy. Bravo.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2023
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I really enjoyed this story. If this were in a book, I'd have to say I couldn't put the book down. It was very engaging, realistic, and sweet. First, he resented the guy, then realized he just wanted her to be happy. Bravo.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2023
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I'm thrilled you enjoyed this story. It's one of my personal favorites. One day I hope to get published. Maybe I'll even publish a book with some of my small works. Who knows what'll happen? Thank you again for reading. Take care. :D :D
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This was an extremely poignant red, and well-written. I enjoyed it very much except I so hoped the mould could be broken and the dead come back to life. kay
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2023
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This was an extremely poignant red, and well-written. I enjoyed it very much except I so hoped the mould could be broken and the dead come back to life. kay
Comment Written 25-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2023
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate it and your feedback. I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. I loved writing it, and it's one of my favorites, though it is sadder than my other stories. Thank you again for reading. Take care. :D :D
Comment from teols2016
A very nice piece. One thing though (and I'm nit-picking): your narrator is clearly watching the whole saga (works for me,) but there are a couple long stretches where that isn't clear, making it a bit jarring when he returns and we are reminded of that. Sprinkle just a few more "I" sentences to even that out. Otherwise, well done. A powerful story.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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A very nice piece. One thing though (and I'm nit-picking): your narrator is clearly watching the whole saga (works for me,) but there are a couple long stretches where that isn't clear, making it a bit jarring when he returns and we are reminded of that. Sprinkle just a few more "I" sentences to even that out. Otherwise, well done. A powerful story.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate it and your feedback. That is a great suggestion; thank you. I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Take care. :D :D
Comment from susand3022
A tragic, yet beautiful story. Tears... lots of tears at the end. I loved it. I don't have any 6s left... but it definitely deserves one. Loss is so devastating, especially when you're young... I just can't even imagine. The persistence of the male character is on the verge of stalker, but it works here.
Nicely done
Susan :)
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2023
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A tragic, yet beautiful story. Tears... lots of tears at the end. I loved it. I don't have any 6s left... but it definitely deserves one. Loss is so devastating, especially when you're young... I just can't even imagine. The persistence of the male character is on the verge of stalker, but it works here.
Nicely done
Susan :)
Comment Written 21-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2023
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate it and your feedback. I'm thrilled you enjoyed it, but I'm sorry it made you cry. Thank you again for reading. :D :D