Comment from Cherish Adams

Excellent

I love the simplicity. It's the little things that bring joy. Well said. The syllable count, rhyme and color requirement are met. Good job and good luck.

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023

Thanks!

Comment from tempeste

Excellent

Ciao poet, you have two votes now.

Love the choice of art

Love the word wispy .. at times those clouds do really look like whipped cream .

Butterflies are beautiful starting off with their complex life cycle .

Love the patterns on their wings .. the coloured dust substance are actually scales ..

it upsets me to know people actually capture them to pin in their collection.

Off to sleep now it's late

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023

Thanks!

reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023

I am in a contest!

Comment from susand3022

Excellent

Hello Author,
You have found some very beautiful and colorful things here, and the picture you chose is so bright and lovely! I liked your alliterative clouds that were white and wispy.
Nice job
Susan :)

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023

Thanks!

reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023

Susan, thanks for your nice words. There is no white clouds though, maybe pink ones in back of the flower.

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Very nice image and presentation.
-You followed all of the prompt directions very well.
-A good topic, effective imagery, and rhyme.
-The nature imagery paints a good word picture
of the clouds, bluebirds, and butterfly.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023

Thanks!

reply by Pam (respa) on 04-Jan-2023

You are welcome!

Comment from RodG

Excellent

You are so right. Beauty is everywhere in Nature. You selected three things it would be hard to ignore. Your reversed haiku meets all the contest requirements. Good luck. Rod

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023

Thanks!