In Our Woods
My carving on our special tree is no longer..3 total reviews
Comment from zanya
There's a nice nostalgic tone quietly unveiled here for the reader in this Nonet -the title holds the key, as it were, 'our woods'- a precious moment remembered
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022
There's a nice nostalgic tone quietly unveiled here for the reader in this Nonet -the title holds the key, as it were, 'our woods'- a precious moment remembered
Comment Written 18-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022
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Thank you for the read and review. Six stars are appreciated.
Comment from prettybluebirds
This is heart-touching writing. The artwork is perfect for the subject of the writing. Is that a picture of you? The words have a delightful flow. I wish you worlds of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2022
This is heart-touching writing. The artwork is perfect for the subject of the writing. Is that a picture of you? The words have a delightful flow. I wish you worlds of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2022
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Not me. Thanks for the read and the feedback.
Comment from Karyn2
This is great! I love that this engages so many senses and the simple message that though time passes, love still remains. I'm not sure if it's just my phone that has formatted text differently, but it would look amazing if your whole 9 syllables fit in one line not 2. Could just be the way it shows on my device though. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2022
This is great! I love that this engages so many senses and the simple message that though time passes, love still remains. I'm not sure if it's just my phone that has formatted text differently, but it would look amazing if your whole 9 syllables fit in one line not 2. Could just be the way it shows on my device though. Best wishes.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2022
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Thank you for the encouraging comments. Appreciated. I think the nine syllable line being in two lines may be the formatting on your phone.
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No worries then at all!