God Called
God came to recover his soul31 total reviews
Comment from John Ciarmello
Hi, Willie! I enjoyed this poem with a message to be kind, especially to God if it happens, you pass to that side. It's one of my goals in life or perhaps in death! Super cool poem! Best JohnC
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Hi, Willie! I enjoyed this poem with a message to be kind, especially to God if it happens, you pass to that side. It's one of my goals in life or perhaps in death! Super cool poem! Best JohnC
Comment Written 02-Dec-2022
Comment from Paul McFarland
That's a good one, Willie. There are many who suffer when a spouse dies. Some choose to stick it out to the end alone, while others take an alternate route.
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That's a good one, Willie. There are many who suffer when a spouse dies. Some choose to stick it out to the end alone, while others take an alternate route.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2022
Comment from LJbutterfly
This was quite an enjoyable and cleverly written story in a poem. The storyline flowed smoothly with unforced rhymes. Your chosen artwork paired perfectly with the message of the poem. Well done.
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This was quite an enjoyable and cleverly written story in a poem. The storyline flowed smoothly with unforced rhymes. Your chosen artwork paired perfectly with the message of the poem. Well done.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2022
Comment from Karyn2
Another great offering! You have captured the essence of this character vividly through each line. A lonely, reclusive sort who had known deep love, perhaps not widely understood by many. The last line confronts and challenges, almost posing a question to the reader: "How would you respond, if God came to call?" I love the presentation, image, font: It's a whole package deal!
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Another great offering! You have captured the essence of this character vividly through each line. A lonely, reclusive sort who had known deep love, perhaps not widely understood by many. The last line confronts and challenges, almost posing a question to the reader: "How would you respond, if God came to call?" I love the presentation, image, font: It's a whole package deal!
Comment Written 02-Dec-2022
Comment from barbara.wilkey
God knows what's in our hearts, maybe better than we do sometimes. Thank you for sharing this poem with us. I enjoyed reading. It flowed very smoothly and told a story. Good job.
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God knows what's in our hearts, maybe better than we do sometimes. Thank you for sharing this poem with us. I enjoyed reading. It flowed very smoothly and told a story. Good job.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2022
Comment from Heather Knight
Hi,
Your poem sounds very realistic. Is this somebody you used to know or have you made it up?
Very sad story. Losing one's partner must be terrible.
Thanks so much for sharing your lovely poem.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2022
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Hi,
Your poem sounds very realistic. Is this somebody you used to know or have you made it up?
Very sad story. Losing one's partner must be terrible.
Thanks so much for sharing your lovely poem.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2022
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Heather, thanks for the review and stars. I drew the picture and fitted
the poem around it. I draw a lot of my own pictures. Willie
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Wow! I can only draw stick men.
Comment from Sally Law
This is just a precious poem of a cowboy long departed that someone loved. It's always sad to see someone lose their spouse and give her the world to carry on. This was perfectly written and metered and rhymed. So aching for six today. Sending along with very best to you and yours as always, Sally XOs
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This is just a precious poem of a cowboy long departed that someone loved. It's always sad to see someone lose their spouse and give her the world to carry on. This was perfectly written and metered and rhymed. So aching for six today. Sending along with very best to you and yours as always, Sally XOs
Comment Written 02-Dec-2022
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was so sad, Willie, and probably about half the population who have lost their other half. When you beloved dies, you die a little too. You change. I know, I've been there, and I watched my mother after my dear father died. Mum didn't want to go on without him. She had to, though, for another three years. Then she fell asleep. No guns in this country. Sad, and scary. Well done. :)Sandra xx
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That was so sad, Willie, and probably about half the population who have lost their other half. When you beloved dies, you die a little too. You change. I know, I've been there, and I watched my mother after my dear father died. Mum didn't want to go on without him. She had to, though, for another three years. Then she fell asleep. No guns in this country. Sad, and scary. Well done. :)Sandra xx
Comment Written 02-Dec-2022
Comment from Charles W. Johnson
This is a delightful read. It's both a solid poem with sound rhyming and meter but also an enchanting (and somewhat sad?) tale of an old man not wanting to burden anybody at his end of days. Well done.
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This is a delightful read. It's both a solid poem with sound rhyming and meter but also an enchanting (and somewhat sad?) tale of an old man not wanting to burden anybody at his end of days. Well done.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2022
Comment from Tom Horonzy
The Rock of Gibraltar for many men, historically referenced, would be the loss of a wife or a child. Well told. .............................................................................
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The Rock of Gibraltar for many men, historically referenced, would be the loss of a wife or a child. Well told. .............................................................................
Comment Written 02-Dec-2022