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This is a free verse poem

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Comment from Raul1
Exceptional
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This poem is a well deserving of six stars. It's an exceptional work! Congratulations on winning the contest! Much deserved! Thank you for sharing! Nice work!

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
    Thank you so much, Raul!
    Very sweet of you. I hope you
    have a wondrous and creative weekend. Blessings
reply by Raul1 on 28-Oct-2022
    You're welcome!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Excellent
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Congratulations on your win, Regina. You wrote a
poignant reminder of a time when America failed to
honor those who fight to keep us free. Your words
were well thought out and very descriptive. You covered
many of the aspects of the homecoming event most
returning Vets--a heartbreaking time.
Thanks for sharing and participating, Jan

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
    Thank you so much, Jan.
    I greatly appreciate your
    kind words about our veterans. Many blessings to
    you.
Comment from poetwatch
Exceptional
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Thank you, Regina. You did great in writing what I feel, what I saw, and for the memories of yesteryear when we marched in line and answer the call. I lost a cousin in war and another because of the complications of the war. I came back to the roar of the crowds (those that slept safely in bed) and changed into my civies, hiding my face. I was ashamed to be an American soldier. We were not loved because of a few. This is a great entry, and I congratulate you on your win. :)

Jose

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
    Thank you, Jose.
    Welcome Home, and what a
    shame what you and your
    brothers in arms went through. I can't even imagine.
    There are many of us Americans who do have so
    much respect for our
    Vietnam war veterans. I'm so
    sorry you went through a
    lack of appreciation from
    some others. My every
    sympathy for the loss of
    your cousin and the other
    veteran, they are honored
    and you are too. Many
    blessings to you, and my
    deep gratitude for your
    bravery. ~
Comment from the13thpoet
Excellent
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Happy Thursday Regina. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
    Thank you so much,
    13thpoet. I greatly appreciate
    your taking the time to read
    and review my poem. This
    was not an easy poem to
    write but it needed to be
    written. Many blessings to
    you.


Comment from Ric Myworld
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I'm sure that I've already read this, but why I didn't send a review, I have no earthly idea. I guess, it's the same reason I went to the grocery and come home without the bread. Congratulations on your well deserved win! Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
    Thank you so much, Ric.
    I appreciate you taking the
    time to read and review my
    poem. We owe so much to
    our soldiers. Many blessings
    to you.
Comment from SLMorrical
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A great entry for the contest. I could feel the pain of the mother and wife. Also the pain of the soldier. I new a Vietnam Vet and the flashbacks are real and scary for them and for their loved ones. Good luck in the contest. Well done.

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
    Thank you,SLMorrical. We
    owe so much to our soldiers.
    I appreciate you stopping by
    to read one of the most
    honoring and important
    poems I've ever written.
    Have a creative weekend and
    many blessings to you.
Comment from John Ciarmello
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Such a beautiful dedication to our men and woman who have served Regina. Sadly, modern-day America has not seen the last of the wars, and I'm afraid it will be anything but conventional. I enjoyed the read! Best, JohnC

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
    Thank you so much, John.
    Very kind of you to stop by
    and read my poem. This is one of most important poems as far as getting the
    message out that our military
    deserves good care in a
    timely manner. Many
    blessings to you.
Comment from Lulube
Exceptional
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A heartfelt, tribute for war veterans. I live in Canada and although we are not involved in some wars as much as the states are, it wrenches my guts to hear that Canadians were killed where they were, defending the little guy under attack, just trying to keep the peace. I know a few US vets and deserters from Viet Nam and I believe I can't find the fault in those that ran to Canada
and lived a full life. So many unnecessary deaths on foreign soil
just trying to keep peace and stopping unworthy takeovers.

Thxs for sharing your heart, bless you

lulube

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
    Thank you so much, lulube,
    you're so kind. I worked for
    someone in the states down
    here who evaded the Vietnam War draft. I don't
    pass judgment on anyone
    who avoids war. This is one
    of the most important poems
    I've-ever written, in company
    with my other poems,
    "As We Be Breathed," and,
    "Everyone's Gone To The Moon " Many blessings to
    you.
reply by Lulube on 28-Oct-2022
    welcome thxs for sharing

    lulube
Comment from Wendy G
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Beautiful poem, very raw and honest about the suffering during and after wars of soldiers, young and brave and patriotic. Best wishes for your excellent entry.
Wendy

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
    Thank you so much, Wendy.
    The poem just flowed out
    of me. I wish there were never any more wars. The
    youth always pay the price.
    Many blessings to you.
Comment from papa55mike
Exceptional
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Every day should be Veteran's day in America. The homeless veteran problem is a black eye on our country. What a wonderfully written poem.

Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
    Thank you so much, Mike.
    Yes, we owe our veterans so
    much that we can never repay them even if we all would live 100 years. There's
    a homeless veterans shelter
    a few towns away from us.
    I've donated artwork to it.
    It's a beautiful facility and
    the vets are treated so well
    there. Many blessings to you.