Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 82 "Breakfast maker"Musings of an old man - 2022
21 total reviews
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Wow, I assume there are some things that make no sense, and this contest extended to FStoriest is proof. You did as well as anyone. Good luck. ......................................................................
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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Wow, I assume there are some things that make no sense, and this contest extended to FStoriest is proof. You did as well as anyone. Good luck. ......................................................................
Comment Written 18-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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Thank you, sir!
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It is interesting and entertaining to read. I have understood your poetry. Excellent work! No mistakes found. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It is interesting and entertaining to read. I have understood your poetry. Excellent work! No mistakes found. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 17-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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Thank you Raul
Comment from GWHARGIS
Anytime they include the word orange and tell you to write a rhyming poem, they are setting you up for failure. This was a fun breakfast jaunt. I liked the accompanying picture as well. The rhyming was very good. The poem had a nice glow. Great job. Gretchen
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2022
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Anytime they include the word orange and tell you to write a rhyming poem, they are setting you up for failure. This was a fun breakfast jaunt. I liked the accompanying picture as well. The rhyming was very good. The poem had a nice glow. Great job. Gretchen
Comment Written 16-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2022
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Gretchen thanks I appreciate your comments.
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello Poet, good descriptive writing. You're making a tasty breakfast.
Good rhyming. Well-chosen photo. I especially liked:
and being a scrooge, I will be certain to hide my stash!
(I'm wondering what type of stash it is that you are hiding--money, weed, booze, a sassy woman? Who knows. Lol.)
A fun poem. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck.
LateBloomer
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2022
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Hello Poet, good descriptive writing. You're making a tasty breakfast.
Good rhyming. Well-chosen photo. I especially liked:
and being a scrooge, I will be certain to hide my stash!
(I'm wondering what type of stash it is that you are hiding--money, weed, booze, a sassy woman? Who knows. Lol.)
A fun poem. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck.
LateBloomer
Comment Written 16-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2022
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Simles, Scrooge would never tell ? 🙃
Comment from Charles W. Johnson
To include all those words in only five lines is impressive. I also thought the use of a boat's chef as the narrator was quite clever. Good luck in your contest.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2022
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To include all those words in only five lines is impressive. I also thought the use of a boat's chef as the narrator was quite clever. Good luck in your contest.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2022
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Thank you for your review,sir!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fun write about preparing breakfast and including all those odd words which you managed to do without force here, a fun write and good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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A fun write about preparing breakfast and including all those odd words which you managed to do without force here, a fun write and good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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Smiles of thanks, Dolly
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Breakfast Maker, has all the required words and creates a scene of morning joy with all the good things that can be shared and also squirreled away. Funny.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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This poem, Breakfast Maker, has all the required words and creates a scene of morning joy with all the good things that can be shared and also squirreled away. Funny.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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Thanks, Bill
Comment from jake cosmos aller
god another great poem to fit this prompt. I like the image as well. and the breakfast menu is just perfect it seems. But I agree you can't forget the organges.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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god another great poem to fit this prompt. I like the image as well. and the breakfast menu is just perfect it seems. But I agree you can't forget the organges.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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I appreciate your review!
Comment from karenina
I am getting a kick out of the entries for this contest thus far! So MANY ways to take this and each has been a lark! If you'd asked me to bet anyone would come up with enjoyable poetry with these words, I'd have bet against it...
Hah! What a shocker! I'd have been wrong! (BTW I love the image!)
Karenina
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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I am getting a kick out of the entries for this contest thus far! So MANY ways to take this and each has been a lark! If you'd asked me to bet anyone would come up with enjoyable poetry with these words, I'd have bet against it...
Hah! What a shocker! I'd have been wrong! (BTW I love the image!)
Karenina
Comment Written 15-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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Smiles .....
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I'll take all the smiles I can get!
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
Awesome. You certainly made great use of the required words. I found these words hard to work with. Quite challenging.great photo to compliment your words. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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Awesome. You certainly made great use of the required words. I found these words hard to work with. Quite challenging.great photo to compliment your words. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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I am honored, thank you!