Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig

Excellent

This is a good 2-10-2 contest entry. The text is a great size. The message is clearly stated. The visual selected fits perfectly the clear concrete text/message. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022

I appreciate the good wishes, Sandra.

reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 16-Oct-2022

You are welcome. You are a good writer.

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

I love the sounds of the leaves fall to
the ground...and all their amazing colors...
God at His best...a cinema of beauty...

I love your poem...and love your stunning
picture...so very nicely written...love Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022

Ah, yes, Linda! Autumn is so special thank you!

reply by l.raven on 16-Oct-2022

it really is Jim...I love the smell and
all the colors...

and your so welcome sweet guy...love xxoo

Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick

Excellent

This is a beautifully written Autumn poem. Photo compliments your words well. Leaves are so pretty with All the different colours. Very well done. Good luck in the contest .

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022

Smiles, and thanks!!

Comment from Monica Chaddick

Excellent

This is a beautiful description of Autumn. The picture is a perfect choice to go with your poem. Best of luck to you with this contest and all of your writing endeavors.

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022

Thank you for the good wishes and validation.

Comment from Debi Pick Marquette

Excellent

Great job on this mystery poet! I love the photo and your words are perfectly and beautifully matched to go with it. Absolutely breathtaking poem for the title, Autumn.

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022

Debi thank you!

Comment from Mark D. R.

Excellent

You penned a most interesting verse for this contest entry. Your rhyme scheme and artwork enhances its overall appeal. Leaves quietly sit on our lawns, only the wind rustles them (-;


IMHO you should increase your font size, which may add to your response to your presentation from other reviewers.

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022

Thank you for your guidance.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A pretty picture as those leaves retain a vibrant colour when they slowly die and you captured the blush with your matching rhymes, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022

Thank you much!

Comment from miajaffri

Excellent

Very nice and different too. I like that the first and last line rhyme and
the idea of the cool evenings causing the leaves to still and allow
nature to use its paintbrush to give them their color. I have not seen
the 2-10-2 form before. I like this arrangement too.

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022

Thank you!

reply by miajaffri on 18-Oct-2022

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

This was so very evocative. I love the description of the blush of color. The stillness in the cool evening. You have described fall in such a beautiful way. I really enjoyed your poem. Good luck in the contest. Gretchen

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022

Gretchen, thank you!

Comment from Carolyn Dooley

Excellent

Those God-given creations, of natural colors, are beautiful. I love them. Imagine what heaven looks like judging the beauty of things on earth. Earth bound people have never used and abused those things in heaven. They are pristine. Thank you for sharing this great poem.

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022

Thank you Carolyn, we humans truly have no idea of the coming magnificence of heaven.

reply by Carolyn Dooley on 15-Oct-2022

You are welcome.