Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 64 "Homeward Bound"Musings of an old man - 2022
28 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This is the best stance that would be echoed by Eckhart Tolle: "Where would I rather be, if not here, if not now?" That is encouraging the reader to keep it in the now. My thought is, 'what is the anxiety?' If someone is worried because of what people will think about their undone project, what difference does it make? You're dead! It isn't going to be a situation where you'd say, 'I'd just die if people saw this me.'
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
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This is the best stance that would be echoed by Eckhart Tolle: "Where would I rather be, if not here, if not now?" That is encouraging the reader to keep it in the now. My thought is, 'what is the anxiety?' If someone is worried because of what people will think about their undone project, what difference does it make? You're dead! It isn't going to be a situation where you'd say, 'I'd just die if people saw this me.'
Comment Written 23-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
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Yes I love Eckhart Tolle!
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***big smile***
He changed my life
Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading your poetry. It is well written. Well done. I like your poem. It is clear and concise. Excellent work! No mistakes found. Good job! Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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I have enjoyed reading your poetry. It is well written. Well done. I like your poem. It is clear and concise. Excellent work! No mistakes found. Good job! Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 22-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Raul! Thank you as always for your reviews.
Comment from R.B.Bunn
This was a really interesting poem. The refrain was very interesting and the increasingly impossible to answer questions give the reader much to think over. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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This was a really interesting poem. The refrain was very interesting and the increasingly impossible to answer questions give the reader much to think over. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 22-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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R.B. Conveying my thank you for your review and comments, I do always appreciate feedback.
Comment from NANCY V. FORREST
I liked the repetitive refrain of this piece as well as eh progression of unanswerable questions. The illustration is amazing and a fine compliment to the piece
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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I liked the repetitive refrain of this piece as well as eh progression of unanswerable questions. The illustration is amazing and a fine compliment to the piece
Comment Written 22-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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Nancy, thank you for your review and validation.
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:-)
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are thought provoking! I found this poem to confront, be deep, interesting, detailed, descriptive and creative. I thought about how much life is a mystery and how life goes on. Acceptance is part of the plan. The poem flows and connects well The artwork is awesome and compliments these words.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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The author's words are thought provoking! I found this poem to confront, be deep, interesting, detailed, descriptive and creative. I thought about how much life is a mystery and how life goes on. Acceptance is part of the plan. The poem flows and connects well The artwork is awesome and compliments these words.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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Harmony, thank you for your comments.
Comment from Lilly Flowers
I think your poem is reflecting how, no matter how old we are, we still have many questions about life. The person who stops asking questions is the person who stops learning. This is very well written. Regards, Lilly
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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I think your poem is reflecting how, no matter how old we are, we still have many questions about life. The person who stops asking questions is the person who stops learning. This is very well written. Regards, Lilly
Comment Written 21-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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Thanks, Lilly!
Comment from jenintorre
This is a very thought provoking poem. The repitition works very well. I really enjoyed reading this poem.
Good luck and best wishes. Jen.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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This is a very thought provoking poem. The repitition works very well. I really enjoyed reading this poem.
Good luck and best wishes. Jen.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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Jen thanks for your comments.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. I've read a few interpretations of this artwork. Yours is very interesting. I enjoyed the repeating line. It brought the meaning together with a good flow.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. I've read a few interpretations of this artwork. Yours is very interesting. I enjoyed the repeating line. It brought the meaning together with a good flow.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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Barbara, Thank you so much!
Comment from Alyssa Wilson
This piece is excellent. The repetition draws you in and drives the point home. I've often found myself thinking "if I could just get a little older and a little more wise I'd understand." This piece demonstrates that clearly there are some universal wonders that may never be known to us!
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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This piece is excellent. The repetition draws you in and drives the point home. I've often found myself thinking "if I could just get a little older and a little more wise I'd understand." This piece demonstrates that clearly there are some universal wonders that may never be known to us!
Comment Written 21-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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lyssa, WOW, right back to you! I thank you so very much for your validation on this poetic discourse.
Comment from Kevin McNeany
WOW! Virtual six! The refrain on this marvelous poem is superb I think it is an excellent entry. It had excellent rhythm and gave me much to think about. Well done look forward to reading more of your work kindest regards Kevin :)
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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WOW! Virtual six! The refrain on this marvelous poem is superb I think it is an excellent entry. It had excellent rhythm and gave me much to think about. Well done look forward to reading more of your work kindest regards Kevin :)
Comment Written 21-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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Kevin, I smile! Thanks for your virtual six, and kind comments.