A Display of Emotion
Farewelling a valued colleague. (75 words)20 total reviews
Comment from karenina
Ba-Da-Dum-Dum...
(Drum roll after the closing line!)
How did I miss this one??
You are hysterical!
I woke my husband up to read this to him!
Okay...but he'll be chuckling after coffee tomorrow morning!
(Note to self: Do not awaken sleeping giants at 1:56 AM!)
Congrats, Lisa!!!
Karenina
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Ba-Da-Dum-Dum...
(Drum roll after the closing line!)
How did I miss this one??
You are hysterical!
I woke my husband up to read this to him!
Okay...but he'll be chuckling after coffee tomorrow morning!
(Note to self: Do not awaken sleeping giants at 1:56 AM!)
Congrats, Lisa!!!
Karenina
Comment Written 16-Aug-2022
Comment from artisart4u
This is humorous. It has a good start and ending. Your punctuation marks are nice and it is written as a story should be written.
I counted the words and you have 75 of them.
Congratulations on being a winner which probably makes you proud and also being recognized.
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This is humorous. It has a good start and ending. Your punctuation marks are nice and it is written as a story should be written.
I counted the words and you have 75 of them.
Congratulations on being a winner which probably makes you proud and also being recognized.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2022
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Lisa,
I like Mildred's sarcastic reaction to this statement. I don't think it is an honor, maybe she doesn't think so either.
Congratulations on the contest win.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
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Hi Lisa,
I like Mildred's sarcastic reaction to this statement. I don't think it is an honor, maybe she doesn't think so either.
Congratulations on the contest win.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
Comment Written 15-Aug-2022
Comment from Contests
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 A contest winning entry! A seven star rating from the Contest Committee for posting the winning contest entry. |
Comment Written 15-Aug-2022
Comment from LJbutterfly
Haha! This is definitely a humorous flash fiction entry into the contest. Mildred had the perfect answer to the Director's joke. "I haven't been mounted in decades." The perfect punch-line to this story. Best wishes in the contest.
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Haha! This is definitely a humorous flash fiction entry into the contest. Mildred had the perfect answer to the Director's joke. "I haven't been mounted in decades." The perfect punch-line to this story. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2022
Comment from Father Flaps
Hey, Lisa. You made me laugh with that last line... priceless!
"Some days I feel quite stuffed already, and I haven't been mounted for decades!"
What a terrific entry for the 75 Words Flash Fiction. I foresee a win here. But I'll say "Good Luck!" anyway. Thanks for brightening up my evening of pain. I've had an aching jaw since last Friday.
Hugs,
Kimbob
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Hey, Lisa. You made me laugh with that last line... priceless!
"Some days I feel quite stuffed already, and I haven't been mounted for decades!"
What a terrific entry for the 75 Words Flash Fiction. I foresee a win here. But I'll say "Good Luck!" anyway. Thanks for brightening up my evening of pain. I've had an aching jaw since last Friday.
Hugs,
Kimbob
Comment Written 20-Jul-2022
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Lisamay a Good day to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your flash fiction contest entry, you executed it well with some good humor. Good job and good luck in the contest.
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Hello Lisamay a Good day to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your flash fiction contest entry, you executed it well with some good humor. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2022
Comment from Michele Harber
Very funny - despite the fact that you're wreaking havoc on my poor virgin eyes. Your punchline is absolutely perfect, and completely unexpected. Thank you for a well-needed laugh. Good luck in the contest. I'll probably enter this contest eventually but, as usual, you're giving me stiff competition (pun definitely intended!!!).
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Very funny - despite the fact that you're wreaking havoc on my poor virgin eyes. Your punchline is absolutely perfect, and completely unexpected. Thank you for a well-needed laugh. Good luck in the contest. I'll probably enter this contest eventually but, as usual, you're giving me stiff competition (pun definitely intended!!!).
Comment Written 19-Jul-2022
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Lisa,
Wink! at your double entendres!
These limited- word assignments are difficult for anyone: you deftly up your story with humor.
Good luck, Lisa.
Blessings,
Cindy
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Lisa,
Wink! at your double entendres!
These limited- word assignments are difficult for anyone: you deftly up your story with humor.
Good luck, Lisa.
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 18-Jul-2022
Comment from robyn corum
LM,
hahahahaha!! So, that's an absolute yes to the proposition, right? hahaha! Bless her heart! Maybe when she's working less, she'll have time to pursue more exciting things in life!!! hahaha
Thanks and good luck!
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LM,
hahahahaha!! So, that's an absolute yes to the proposition, right? hahaha! Bless her heart! Maybe when she's working less, she'll have time to pursue more exciting things in life!!! hahaha
Thanks and good luck!
Comment Written 18-Jul-2022