Comment from Fleedleflump

Excellent

There are some lovely thoughts and phrases dotted through your acrostic piece - I like the running theme of making the most of what you have and learning to see the beauty in from of your eyes.

Nice.

Mike

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022

Thank you for reading my poem and for this nice review. :)

Comment from GARY MACLEAN

Excellent

I love it. What a great message for the world today. Every line true and independent from all others. A great job on satisfying the acrostic requirements.

I really like it.

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022

Thank you, that means a lot to me. :)

Comment from Tom Horonzy

Excellent

Your message is clear and on pointe and yet we are being indoctrinate but politicians, educators and media that life is a constant battle wherein dark defeats the light.

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022

We need new politicians for sure. Thank you for reading my poem, it's really appreciated. :)

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This acrostic poem, BEAUTIFUL, follows the vertical, first-letter theme with an AABBCC rhyme scheme and reminds the readers that all around us the signs of life stand with us and marvel at all of our collected beauty. Nice.

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022

Thanks so much for this great review. :)

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

This is well written and well presented. Your rhyme and metre are both smooth and effective and all your chosen words remain on topic. A clear message too. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022

Thank you, I appreciate this great review and your kind words. :)

Comment from Cindy Decker 2

Excellent

Author,
Your poem is striking and beautiful. Your rhyme is perfect. and your message is clear. I'll have to save this poem to my bookcase for a rainy day, when I need a push to appreciate just how wonderful life can be.
Good luck with this one!!
Cindy

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022

Thank you for this wonderful review. :)

Comment from Regina Elliott

Excellent

Lovely and bright rhyming
acrostic, dear poet. It's
refreshing to read some
cheerful works. Best of luck
for the competition, it's a
great contender. Blessings ~

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022

Thanks so much for this nice review, it's so appreciated. :)

Comment from Carolyn Dooley

Excellent

This is a great poem about beauty. I enjoyed reading your words. Thank you for sharing the poem and great picture that fits perfectly. Yes, we need to live, laugh and love as we can. Have a great day.

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022

Thank you for this nice review. You have a wonderful day as well. :)

reply by Carolyn Dooley on 17-Jun-2022

You are welcome. You have a great day.

Comment from C T Curtis

Exceptional

My opinion is that this is a beautiful, well-written acrostic rhyming poem. Good job! I like the picture you chose for the poem. We can't live our 'what if's' - we should live fully in the minute, it's a gift. Well done!

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022

Thank you for this exceptional review, it's so kind of you. :)

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

So true! I love your poem and I seek out the beautiful myself. Ugly is just not worth it. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal XOs

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022

Thank you so much, it's very nice to hear from you. :)