Verse and Story for 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "Remembering Through the Ages"poems, stories
2 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your poem is excellent in every respect--well worded, movingly patriotic, and descriptive, conveying a message about our military and the deep respect they deserve.
reply by the author on 31-May-2022
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Your poem is excellent in every respect--well worded, movingly patriotic, and descriptive, conveying a message about our military and the deep respect they deserve.
Comment Written 30-May-2022
reply by the author on 31-May-2022
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Dear Janice, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job honoring those who gave their all, Dove.
Your lines read well, but most of all, they show the patriotism
you have for our fallen military individuals. Your end rhymes
worked well, the image is perfect, and your dedication is
honorable.
If you would like, you can add your dedication above the top
border line of the poem this way:
go to advanced editor on your page like you were going to edit
scroll to Show Advanced Options
Scroll to Add a dedication--near the top
Do this
Dedicated to My Father
SAVE SAVE
Then go back and view
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 30-May-2022
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You did a great job honoring those who gave their all, Dove.
Your lines read well, but most of all, they show the patriotism
you have for our fallen military individuals. Your end rhymes
worked well, the image is perfect, and your dedication is
honorable.
If you would like, you can add your dedication above the top
border line of the poem this way:
go to advanced editor on your page like you were going to edit
scroll to Show Advanced Options
Scroll to Add a dedication--near the top
Do this
Dedicated to My Father
SAVE SAVE
Then go back and view
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 30-May-2022
reply by the author on 30-May-2022
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Dear Jan, thank you for your comments and review. Dove