My Wish for America
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Comment from Tom Horonzy
You are delirious because the deck is being stacked each year a little more as progressives buy votes of minority groups and illegal folks from other shores who sooner than you know are on the dole from people who spend but have never earned a red cent since they were voted in office.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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You are delirious because the deck is being stacked each year a little more as progressives buy votes of minority groups and illegal folks from other shores who sooner than you know are on the dole from people who spend but have never earned a red cent since they were voted in office.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Tom, I cannot live without hope. I know the odds are on the side of Soros, et al and the dishonest Americans who would rather see us be a socialist country than the wonderful one we were before Biden and crew took over. I just hope there are enough Republican patriot governors left who will make sure their state has secure elections. Last I heard there were only 7.
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ugh. Insanity = doing the same thing and expecting different results.
Comment from JLR
Writer this is an artfully deliver poetic message delivered in the required twenty-five-word format to meet the contest rules. A good offering and best wishes in the booth.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Writer this is an artfully deliver poetic message delivered in the required twenty-five-word format to meet the contest rules. A good offering and best wishes in the booth.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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thank you!
Comment from Sally Law
Outstanding short verse poem and keenly felt by me. I agree wholeheartedly. Our current leader has failed us in every aspect. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Outstanding short verse poem and keenly felt by me. I agree wholeheartedly. Our current leader has failed us in every aspect. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal XOs
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much, Sally.
That is quite a picture!
Glad you are happy.
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Happily married! :))
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 25 Words writing prompt contest. Good word count. I like the presentation.
A political poem but not negative.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Excellent entry for the 25 Words writing prompt contest. Good word count. I like the presentation.
A political poem but not negative.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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thank you, ma'am. Much appreciated.
Comment from in777wr#
This is a well crafted poem. The last line of your poem says it all. Preparedness is key. Good message in this poem. Your twenty five words meets the requirement for this writing prompt. Nice job.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2022
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This is a well crafted poem. The last line of your poem says it all. Preparedness is key. Good message in this poem. Your twenty five words meets the requirement for this writing prompt. Nice job.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2022
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thank you
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You're welcome.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry reads well, is true, has the correct number of syllables, is presented well, and should make all realize the importance of a strong leadership, Mystery author.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
Our Colors Don't Run!
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
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Your contest entry reads well, is true, has the correct number of syllables, is presented well, and should make all realize the importance of a strong leadership, Mystery author.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
Our Colors Don't Run!
Comment Written 28-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
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thanks, Jan. Honestly, I don't see how anyone could think otherwise, unless they live in a hole.
Comment from Bill Schott
This twenty-five-word poem, My Wish for America, has the proper word count and suggests that there needs to be a change at the helm for the U.S. of A. Since Ukraine helped get Trump impeached a second time, it wouldn't be likely that he would be leading us into any NATO response to Putin's invasion. Tee hee, just kidding. Putin wouldn't have invaded until 2026 when Trump's second term was over.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
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This twenty-five-word poem, My Wish for America, has the proper word count and suggests that there needs to be a change at the helm for the U.S. of A. Since Ukraine helped get Trump impeached a second time, it wouldn't be likely that he would be leading us into any NATO response to Putin's invasion. Tee hee, just kidding. Putin wouldn't have invaded until 2026 when Trump's second term was over.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
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True, however I wasn't aware that Ukraine helped get Trump impeached. I think Zelenskyy would like him or at least admire his strength and the fact that he cared for his people.
Thanks for your response.
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Trump held up senate-approved arms for Ukraine with the proviso that Zelensky announce that his government was launching an investigation into Hunter Biden.
Zelensky said no and it all came out.
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well phooey!
Comment from jessizero
Congratulations on making a sincere, succinct story/poem in only 25 words. Thank you for sharing this here on FanStory. Keep up the good work Best wishes.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
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Congratulations on making a sincere, succinct story/poem in only 25 words. Thank you for sharing this here on FanStory. Keep up the good work Best wishes.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
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thanks, Jessi, and best wishes to you!
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
Nice job! Not only did you use the required 25 words for this piece, but you also shared a wise message and even included a rhyme! I enjoyed this piece and totally agree.. Thanks!
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
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Dear Mystery Writer,
Nice job! Not only did you use the required 25 words for this piece, but you also shared a wise message and even included a rhyme! I enjoyed this piece and totally agree.. Thanks!
Comment Written 28-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
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Thanks, Robyn
It seems to get "worser and worser."