Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
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Comment from duchessofdrumborg
' Unknown Destiny ', is an exceptionally well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to read and review. I look forward to seeing your next posting.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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' Unknown Destiny ', is an exceptionally well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to read and review. I look forward to seeing your next posting.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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I loved the concept of penning a poem about the lives of people who cross my path, that just seem to be going in unending circles - arrivign nowhere.
JLR, it's interesting to know just where
you're coming from.
the Duchess :)))
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Steps to nowhere beg the question why, and you made me smile with your explanations of vacant meadows and paths to infinity. I have not head of this form before and you certainly were inventive with it here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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Steps to nowhere beg the question why, and you made me smile with your explanations of vacant meadows and paths to infinity. I have not head of this form before and you certainly were inventive with it here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 11-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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Smiling, I often cross paths with people who simply seem to be spinning around in circles seemingly going no where
Comment from Kit Nongkhlaw
I am from India but I never knew about Ghazal's poetic style. We know that people are singing Ghazal nad Bhajan but you are the first to enlighten us on this famous poetic style. Thanks for sharing this beautiful English Ghazal, Kit.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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I am from India but I never knew about Ghazal's poetic style. We know that people are singing Ghazal nad Bhajan but you are the first to enlighten us on this famous poetic style. Thanks for sharing this beautiful English Ghazal, Kit.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much and Namaste! Jim
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You are welcome
Comment from Aspiring2Write
Excellent poem. Just wondering where do the steps lead you? Really enjoyed reading this. Wishing you the best in your future writing.
Yours Truly,
Joshua Law
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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Excellent poem. Just wondering where do the steps lead you? Really enjoyed reading this. Wishing you the best in your future writing.
Yours Truly,
Joshua Law
Comment Written 11-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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Thanks Joshua! Just the case for so many people - Life can seem, at times, that we are just going in cirlces..
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Ok
Comment from karenina
Your words are lovely, the form perplexed me... I fear I'd make a mess of it, but can certainly appreciate when someone else grasps the rules and runs with them!
Karenina
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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Your words are lovely, the form perplexed me... I fear I'd make a mess of it, but can certainly appreciate when someone else grasps the rules and runs with them!
Karenina
Comment Written 11-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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Smiles!
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Smiles back...
~K
Comment from Heather Burroughs
Your poem is incredibly interesting, I don't think I've seen one like it which makes it even better. Thank you for sharing. Many blessings to you and your loved ones
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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Your poem is incredibly interesting, I don't think I've seen one like it which makes it even better. Thank you for sharing. Many blessings to you and your loved ones
Comment Written 10-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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Heather, I am pleased you enjoyed this poetic style.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a good job with a style that few know. However, you handled it with perfection. Your words flow smoothly, the rhymes are located in the correct places, and your message is clear. Your repeating phrase adds emphasis to your theme of going nowhere.
Respectfully. Jan
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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You did a good job with a style that few know. However, you handled it with perfection. Your words flow smoothly, the rhymes are located in the correct places, and your message is clear. Your repeating phrase adds emphasis to your theme of going nowhere.
Respectfully. Jan
Comment Written 10-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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Hi JAn, I suspectg at times many of us feel as though we are running in circles to get nowhere,
Comment from lyenochka
You're so adventuresome with your poetic journey, Jim! I remember years ago, there was a poet here who wrote a lot of these ghazal poems. I like the echoing of the "nowhere" while still moving forward and giving us a feeling of the spiritual goals in life.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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You're so adventuresome with your poetic journey, Jim! I remember years ago, there was a poet here who wrote a lot of these ghazal poems. I like the echoing of the "nowhere" while still moving forward and giving us a feeling of the spiritual goals in life.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much! So often, I run across people who feel as though they are running in circles to get to nowhere when they are somewhere that they simply don't stop to appreciate.
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A wise observation! Sometimes, it's just our mindset that imprisons us.
Comment from royowen
How fascinating Jim, you've managed it, the refrain is perfect for the poetic form, how clever people are to think up these clever pieces of written forms that challenge the mind, more than that, the soul to adjust, beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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How fascinating Jim, you've managed it, the refrain is perfect for the poetic form, how clever people are to think up these clever pieces of written forms that challenge the mind, more than that, the soul to adjust, beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 10-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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Roy, you are so kind in your reviews and validation! Have a super, super weekend!I am off to do volunteer training at our local hospital today ... be well friend!
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Well done
Comment from Sugarray77
Oh, I enjoyed your Ghazal, Jim. You really mastered that form. I have written a few of them about three years ago when I found Shadow Poetry and perused the site. I use it often to get inspired. Your rhyming words were perfect. An enjoyable read.
Melissa
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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Oh, I enjoyed your Ghazal, Jim. You really mastered that form. I have written a few of them about three years ago when I found Shadow Poetry and perused the site. I use it often to get inspired. Your rhyming words were perfect. An enjoyable read.
Melissa
Comment Written 10-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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Hi friend! I trust your malady is being you and Spring is in your vision!