Comrade Pops
For shaken by his country7 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the The Prisoner writing prompt contest. You followed the rules well. The flash fiction has a clear plot that though short it conveyed effective ideas.
Poor Pop, what a sad ending.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
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Excellent entry for the The Prisoner writing prompt contest. You followed the rules well. The flash fiction has a clear plot that though short it conveyed effective ideas.
Poor Pop, what a sad ending.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 11-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
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Hello Gypsy, thank you for your review.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Oh goodness, a prisoner who hung himself. This is very devastating when you hear or see this type of suicide. Suicide is not a good thing in the first place. It is a tragic death.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
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Oh goodness, a prisoner who hung himself. This is very devastating when you hear or see this type of suicide. Suicide is not a good thing in the first place. It is a tragic death.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
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Thank you for your review. Yes these things happen alot.
Comment from Cass Carlton
You have a glaring spelling error in this my friend. the word you need to be using is foresaken. It means to be abandoned, left by the wayside. Correct it before anyone else sees it. cheers Cass
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
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You have a glaring spelling error in this my friend. the word you need to be using is foresaken. It means to be abandoned, left by the wayside. Correct it before anyone else sees it. cheers Cass
Comment Written 10-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
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Oops, I guess I made an error, thanks for catching it for me. I really appreciate another pair of eyes looking at my work, and you did, thank you.
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello mystery writer a terrific Thursday to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your the Prisoner writing prompt entry, you executed it well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
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Hello mystery writer a terrific Thursday to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your the Prisoner writing prompt entry, you executed it well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
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Thank you. I appreciate you comments.
Comment from Liz O'Neill
'For shaken' is a much more appropriate animated word for what went on in his mind and psyche. "In his past, he had been a KGB agent. His mission was to gather intelligence." That was a scary career. It makes me think of the TV show from when I was a kid called I Led 3 Lives. We shook as we watched it. It's actually still on
You Tube.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
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'For shaken' is a much more appropriate animated word for what went on in his mind and psyche. "In his past, he had been a KGB agent. His mission was to gather intelligence." That was a scary career. It makes me think of the TV show from when I was a kid called I Led 3 Lives. We shook as we watched it. It's actually still on
You Tube.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
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Yes, he was a KGB agent, an intelligent person, I can't believe he ended his life in a low note. Thank you for your review. I will try to catch the show.
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It is on you tube. Very dramatic probably because of the era it was produced. This show was based on fact. Move the cursor to 2 minutes to begin the story
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GWveDieaTkY
Comment from lancellot
Very interesting. The notion of being disavowed by ones country, is an old worry in spy thrillers.
electronic training put him in good standing ground within the prison.
I do wonder about this line. I would look at it closely.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
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Very interesting. The notion of being disavowed by ones country, is an old worry in spy thrillers.
electronic training put him in good standing ground within the prison.
I do wonder about this line. I would look at it closely.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
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Yes, he was disowned and left to deal with incarceration by himself. He was a genius in electronics and system used his trade for company's gain. I could reword it. Thank you.
Comment from Theodore McDowell
GReat non-fiction story for the writing prompt on prisoners. A KGB agent for shaken by his country, I love that phrase and the misspelling. Yes, so many casualties of war from suicide.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
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GReat non-fiction story for the writing prompt on prisoners. A KGB agent for shaken by his country, I love that phrase and the misspelling. Yes, so many casualties of war from suicide.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
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Thank you for your comments, and I apologize for the misspell words.