Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "Fishing dream"Musings of an old man - 2022
28 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Great descriptions of your soggy fishing shoes JLR I could feel the discomfort that you do not as you track along the stream after the illusive trout. Enjoyed it, cheers
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2022
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Great descriptions of your soggy fishing shoes JLR I could feel the discomfort that you do not as you track along the stream after the illusive trout. Enjoyed it, cheers
Comment Written 17-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2022
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Thank you Pearl!
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
I enjoyed your poem because it brought back memories of the times I fished with my dad, thanks for that. I hope you keep writing and submitting. I will recommend you to friends and family.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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I enjoyed your poem because it brought back memories of the times I fished with my dad, thanks for that. I hope you keep writing and submitting. I will recommend you to friends and family.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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Thank you for sharing fond memories and enjoy the week ahead!
Comment from pookietoo
A nice free verse poem. I wish you luck in the poems you write about. Keep up the great work and keep smiling. Enjoy the little things in life. :) :)
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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A nice free verse poem. I wish you luck in the poems you write about. Keep up the great work and keep smiling. Enjoy the little things in life. :) :)
Comment Written 06-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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You have a great Sunday!
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
' Fishing dream ', is an exceptionally well-written and deftly descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you get on?
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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' Fishing dream ', is an exceptionally well-written and deftly descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you get on?
Comment Written 05-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Hi friend, I am getting along quite smartly - thank you for asking. I hope your have a super week!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Gosh, only a very dedicated, determined fisherman would go through what you have described to get that big one! Your poem is very descriptive and expressive.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Gosh, only a very dedicated, determined fisherman would go through what you have described to get that big one! Your poem is very descriptive and expressive.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Smiles and grins, yes the elusive old trout tesrts ones patience,
Comment from Benny Beeharry
Hi How nicely and with extraordinary determination you set the whole thing out . Absolutely beautiful, I love the determination to catch that trout.
Benny Beeharry
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Hi How nicely and with extraordinary determination you set the whole thing out . Absolutely beautiful, I love the determination to catch that trout.
Benny Beeharry
Comment Written 05-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Thanks Benny!
Comment from Bill Schott
This free verse, Fishing Dream, places the sad fisherman in one of those dreadful dreams where nothing goes right and then big gets away. Wet shoes as well. Arrg!
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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This free verse, Fishing Dream, places the sad fisherman in one of those dreadful dreams where nothing goes right and then big gets away. Wet shoes as well. Arrg!
Comment Written 05-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Hi Bill ... thabks for plowing through my free verse!
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I'm wondering, did you ever catch that trout? Lol, they can be very clever, and will avoid the rod if they can! I really enjoyed reading your poem, it took me back many years when my brother would be out there hoping to catch the big one! Well done! :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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I'm wondering, did you ever catch that trout? Lol, they can be very clever, and will avoid the rod if they can! I really enjoyed reading your poem, it took me back many years when my brother would be out there hoping to catch the big one! Well done! :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 05-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Smiling back, I bet your brother had great respect for those wise and elusive grandfather fish.
Comment from Terry Broxson
This poem sounds exactly right for a young fellow to trek his favorite fishing spot. I think it should do well in the contest, good luck. I do envy you guys who were close to a fishing hole. Growing up we had a several-hour drive to go fishing, so it was always an event. Good job.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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This poem sounds exactly right for a young fellow to trek his favorite fishing spot. I think it should do well in the contest, good luck. I do envy you guys who were close to a fishing hole. Growing up we had a several-hour drive to go fishing, so it was always an event. Good job.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Ahh, the great memories, thanks for sharing.
Comment from Anne Johnston
Interesting picture and you have so accurately described the shoes in it. Some people will put up with wet, uncomfortable feet and other things in order to pursue their dream.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Interesting picture and you have so accurately described the shoes in it. Some people will put up with wet, uncomfortable feet and other things in order to pursue their dream.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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This a true reflection I would agree, wet feet ...ugh!
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You are welcome