Rainstorm
Mother Nature's performance art4 total reviews
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Enjoyable read. Found a few words extraneous to the flow. Congrats to your recent publication and continue good writing. Stop sending snow fom there to here please.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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Enjoyable read. Found a few words extraneous to the flow. Congrats to your recent publication and continue good writing. Stop sending snow fom there to here please.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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We actually have had very little, so rest easy not sending any. Thanks for the read and the feedback.
Comment from tempeste
Ciao mystery poet, you now have 7 votes.
There were many seasonal entries but yours stood out from the crowd because I love storms.
I live in a valley and Mother Nature definitely gives quite a performance... rolling thunder and lightening that cracks open the sky.
It's quite frightening but at the same time electrifying too.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Ciao mystery poet, you now have 7 votes.
There were many seasonal entries but yours stood out from the crowd because I love storms.
I live in a valley and Mother Nature definitely gives quite a performance... rolling thunder and lightening that cracks open the sky.
It's quite frightening but at the same time electrifying too.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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I too enjoy rainstorm and when lightning scratches the sky. Thanks for the read and the feedback. Your name kind of reminds me, you don't live a teapot do you?
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I chose Tempeste which in my language means Storms ..plurale
I chose it for obvious reasons.. ( biggrin)
The sound of the thunder is amplified .. and it bounces through the valley.
My windows vibrate .. it really feels Thor is wielding his hammer ( wink)
Take care.
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Love it.
Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent acrostic poem for the contest
with wonderful imagery and description of the rainstorm.
The rhymes are very good and the presentation works well
Nicely done.
Best wishes in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2022
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You've written an excellent acrostic poem for the contest
with wonderful imagery and description of the rainstorm.
The rhymes are very good and the presentation works well
Nicely done.
Best wishes in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 17-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2022
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Thank you for your encouraging feedback.
Comment from Yuffie
Very well done. With the color red so prominent in your piece, I actually thought it evoked a sad yet heated emotion from within. I was reading about a rainstorm, but also thought it was someone's own thoughts.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2022
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Very well done. With the color red so prominent in your piece, I actually thought it evoked a sad yet heated emotion from within. I was reading about a rainstorm, but also thought it was someone's own thoughts.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2022
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I like your interpretation and that thought crossed my mind as I wrote, then I focused on the physicality of the passing of the storm. Unfortunately, in life, it does not always happen that way. Thanks for your read and feedback.