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Comment from Gee
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Nicely done and great message to live life by.
Also, Happy Birthday!!!
and many more.

My birthday is on the 16th.

Thanks for sharing we appreciate it.


 Comment Written 14-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
    Dear Gee, Belated Happy Birthday! Many more to you too. Thank you for your comments and review, fellow Capricorn. Dove
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Happy birthday Donna and I hope you have a wonderful day, everybody's birthday is special and you need to celebrate another year on earth, I will drink to you, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
    Hi Dolly, thank you, I am having a wonderful day so far, and I am going out tonite with a friend for dinner. The Longhorn Steakhouse. Juicy, wonderful meats and fluffy mashed potatoes! Love, Donna xx
reply by Dolly'sPoems on 14-Jan-2022
    I an envious, have a great time x x x
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
    Thank you, Dolly!
Comment from Anne Johnston
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Happy Birthday to you, hope that you have a wonderful day. I like the verse: "Many birthdays I've spent alone,
Isolated, empty, cut to the bone
On sparrows' and eagles' wings I've flown
In sadness and joy, I have grown"
We all have good and bad times in life, but that is what makes us strong.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
    Dear Anne, thank you for your comments and review. Another Fan Storian who just reviewed this poem said similar things about the verse that caught your eye. Dove
reply by Anne Johnston on 15-Jan-2022
    You are welcome
Comment from Theodore McDowell
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Happy 66th coming up. Good poem, I really like the details and imagery of the following stanza: Many birthdays I've spent alone,
Isolated, empty, cut to the bone
On sparrows' and eagles' wings I've flown
In sadness and joy, I have grown

Great job.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
    Dear Theodore, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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This poem really resonates with me; I'll turn70 in just a few days. I too
have experienced quite a range of experiences, from joy to sorrow. Like you, I look forward to Heaven. Your poem is deeply spiritual and lovely, quite moving.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
    Dear Janice, Pre-Happy Birthday! You're coming to a milestone. Thank you for your comments and review. Dove