Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "New Year Opportunities"Musings of an old man - 2022
19 total reviews
Comment from Melodie Michelle
Congratulations on being RECOGNIZED my friend! Perfect for the 20 syllable contest and best of wishes in the contest! The words flowed perfectly fine together throughout the piece;-)
Thanks for sharing this well written piece with us and many blessings to you and your family this New Year;-)
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022
Congratulations on being RECOGNIZED my friend! Perfect for the 20 syllable contest and best of wishes in the contest! The words flowed perfectly fine together throughout the piece;-)
Thanks for sharing this well written piece with us and many blessings to you and your family this New Year;-)
Comment Written 07-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022
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Thank you 🙏 I appreciate your comments
Comment from Patty Palmer
A great entry for the 20 syllable contest. Your poem gives good advice for us all to pay attention to what we're doing all year long. There are so many opportunities to make life better. Good luck with the contest~
Patty
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022
A great entry for the 20 syllable contest. Your poem gives good advice for us all to pay attention to what we're doing all year long. There are so many opportunities to make life better. Good luck with the contest~
Patty
Comment Written 07-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022
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Thank you for reading and commenting 🙏🙏🎶
Comment from karenina
I have really been enjoying these twenty syllable creations! How perfect to focus on this new year blossoming! Nice image to enhance your work!
Karenina
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022
I have really been enjoying these twenty syllable creations! How perfect to focus on this new year blossoming! Nice image to enhance your work!
Karenina
Comment Written 06-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of your twenty syllables in this expressive, uplifting, forward-focused piece. We must nurture our mental, physical, and spiritual health in 2022.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022
You have made excellent use of your twenty syllables in this expressive, uplifting, forward-focused piece. We must nurture our mental, physical, and spiritual health in 2022.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022
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Thanks Janice, enjoy 2022 to its? fullest! 👍👍👍🎶🎶
Comment from Minglement
What beautiful sentiments to begin the new year. After such a difficult 2921, we need this encouragement to look forward to a better 2022 and have a mindset to make it a better year. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022
What beautiful sentiments to begin the new year. After such a difficult 2921, we need this encouragement to look forward to a better 2022 and have a mindset to make it a better year. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much! let 2022 rock your world In wonderful ways!
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You are most welcome and thank you. 2022 has gotta be better, right ;)
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are a perfect New Year's Wish for all! The words are
uplifting, meaningful and creative. I pondered on the theme of this poem.
And yes I agree love, dance, and pray. The artwork is awesome and
compliments these words.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2022
The author's words are a perfect New Year's Wish for all! The words are
uplifting, meaningful and creative. I pondered on the theme of this poem.
And yes I agree love, dance, and pray. The artwork is awesome and
compliments these words.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2022
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Thank you Harmony ... May you enjoy the highest and best 2022 will bring onto your life 🙏🙏🙏
Comment from Sugarray77
I loved this upbeat and encouraging verse, Jim. Well done on picking a topic that is fun and peppy. I intend to take your advice and do all three!! :). Good luck.
Melissa
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
I loved this upbeat and encouraging verse, Jim. Well done on picking a topic that is fun and peppy. I intend to take your advice and do all three!! :). Good luck.
Melissa
Comment Written 05-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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Hey Mellisa, thank you! See you in class?
Comment from lyenochka
A great New Year's message, Jim. Yes, let's all "love, dance, and pray!" All these actions help our minds, bodies, souls and spirits so that we can keep living as best as we can. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
A great New Year's message, Jim. Yes, let's all "love, dance, and pray!" All these actions help our minds, bodies, souls and spirits so that we can keep living as best as we can. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 05-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from royowen
I think one of things we look for in life, is to squeeze some hedonism, after all, not being perfect, there is the "happiness" realm, which depends on moments, but of course the spiritual joy is "forever l well done Jim, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
I think one of things we look for in life, is to squeeze some hedonism, after all, not being perfect, there is the "happiness" realm, which depends on moments, but of course the spiritual joy is "forever l well done Jim, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 05-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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Thanks Roy!
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welcome Jim
Comment from Anne Johnston
"Harken Thee one and all!
Think mind, body, spirit
this whole year-long ...
love, dance, and pray!"
I like your entry for this contest. This year will be what we make it - in spite of restrictions we have a lot to be thankful for.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
"Harken Thee one and all!
Think mind, body, spirit
this whole year-long ...
love, dance, and pray!"
I like your entry for this contest. This year will be what we make it - in spite of restrictions we have a lot to be thankful for.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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Thanks Anne,🙏🙏
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You are welcome