My Favorite Shoes
(The best in all my life)20 total reviews
Comment from artisart4u
Yes, I can recall those types of shoes and now I am down to the lower heels that fit my age. If I take the cane, then it is flat shoes and when I am at home it is the slippers.
I often look back and the different types of shoes I once wore.
I liked the picture and the feet at the end as well as the font and the color you used. I also like centered poems.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2024
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Yes, I can recall those types of shoes and now I am down to the lower heels that fit my age. If I take the cane, then it is flat shoes and when I am at home it is the slippers.
I often look back and the different types of shoes I once wore.
I liked the picture and the feet at the end as well as the font and the color you used. I also like centered poems.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2024
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Thank you so very much for your wonderful review! I'm so happy you enjoyed... It was fun putting this piece together and remembering back to all the styles! When I find any pair that is comfy now, I'm ecstatic! Thank you again and have a very Happy and Prosperous New Year!
Comment from Sarah Tummey
I love how you incorporated the different decades and their trends into this poem. I think my favourite shoes would have been the ones worn with the wedding dress.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2022
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I love how you incorporated the different decades and their trends into this poem. I think my favourite shoes would have been the ones worn with the wedding dress.
Comment Written 22-May-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2022
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I am so sorry I did not see this until now and I want to thank you so much for taking time to read and send your review! It was so much fun to write and took me through decades of my love for shoes! Thank you once again?. I am so happy you enjoyed!
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
I have to give you an excellent rating on this poem. I loved reading it and can imagine how the shoes were ones that you truly loved. The styles change with every age and season.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2021
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I have to give you an excellent rating on this poem. I loved reading it and can imagine how the shoes were ones that you truly loved. The styles change with every age and season.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2021
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Hi, Rosemary! I am so happy that you enjoyed My Favorite Shoes and appreciate the wonderful Six-Star rating that you awarded! It was quite a fun trip down memory lane and it was just too hard to pick one specific pair out. I will tell you though, that my original poem had an additional stanza which was one with a fun twist at the end... however, I was told when it was in Committee Review for the contest that the last stanza did not conform to the specific topic of shoes (due to a fun, creative twist to the end). Although I was disappointed that I needed to amend it, I am so happy that my revised was also so well received. Thank you once again for the wonderful review and have a lovely evening!
Comment from pharp
Mystery Poet,
Wow! This beautifully written poem is OUTSTANDING!
You did an exceptional job in the penning of this poem for this writing prompt.
Excellent rhyming throughout with a very smooth flow.
Oh, how I remember the Go-Go-boots. Thanks for sharing a fun and enjoyable read. The very best to you in the contest.
Blessings...Portia
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
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Mystery Poet,
Wow! This beautifully written poem is OUTSTANDING!
You did an exceptional job in the penning of this poem for this writing prompt.
Excellent rhyming throughout with a very smooth flow.
Oh, how I remember the Go-Go-boots. Thanks for sharing a fun and enjoyable read. The very best to you in the contest.
Blessings...Portia
Comment Written 02-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
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Thank you so very much, Portia, for the lovely review! I'm so happy you enjoyed and that it brought back fun memories of the Go-Go boots for you, too! Oh, my... if we could only go back to some of those younger days! LOL! Thank you again for the wonderful review and have a grand evening!
Comment from equestrik
I really loved this and totally enjoyed the walk through history which included such a fun look at the styles for our feet. Such a creative and thoughtful write. Well done.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
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I really loved this and totally enjoyed the walk through history which included such a fun look at the styles for our feet. Such a creative and thoughtful write. Well done.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
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Thank you so much for the beautiful review! It was so fun to write and brought back many, many memories! So happy that you enjoyed! Thanks again and have a wonderful day!
Comment from Susan Newell
Okay Mystery Writer. I had thought about entering a poem along the same theme. But then I said to myself, "Susan, you know SHE won't be able to pass this one up and you will never in a million years aspire to better meter and rhyme. So just wait it out; let her tell the story for the both of us." Glad I didn't waste an entry fee. (Perhaps I should enter the Psychic contest.) ð???ð???ð??? Loved it, but you missed western boots, moccasins, sturdy work boots and Sorel's for cold and snow. Oh, right. No cold or snow there.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2021
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Okay Mystery Writer. I had thought about entering a poem along the same theme. But then I said to myself, "Susan, you know SHE won't be able to pass this one up and you will never in a million years aspire to better meter and rhyme. So just wait it out; let her tell the story for the both of us." Glad I didn't waste an entry fee. (Perhaps I should enter the Psychic contest.) ð???ð???ð??? Loved it, but you missed western boots, moccasins, sturdy work boots and Sorel's for cold and snow. Oh, right. No cold or snow there.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2021
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Oh, my... You just brought back another memory of mine - my Cowgirl boots from the 50's! I loved, loved, loved them! I always wanted to be a cowgirl back then! Gee, sometime soon, I might have to add another stanza! LOL... And thank you so much, Susan for the lovely review. I'm so happy that you enjoyed My Favorite Shoes! Thanks again and have a beautiful day!
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Good luck in the contest.
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Thank you so much and again, greatly appreciate the wonderful review!
Comment from Beejay
How lovely..I can relate to your words so much..
A beautifully presented piece of work that flows so well, sprinkled throughout with humour and talent.
Well done and good luck.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2021
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How lovely..I can relate to your words so much..
A beautifully presented piece of work that flows so well, sprinkled throughout with humour and talent.
Well done and good luck.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2021
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Thank you so much, Beejay, for the wonderful review! I'm so happy that you enjoyed and that it brought back memories of your own! Thank you again and have a super day!
Comment from papa55mike
The crazy thing is, all of those styles are in fashion right now. You should've saved them all. What a wonderfully written poem. I wish I had a six for you.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2021
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The crazy thing is, all of those styles are in fashion right now. You should've saved them all. What a wonderfully written poem. I wish I had a six for you.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 29-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2021
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Thank you so much for the wonderful review! And isn't it the truth... things always seem to come back. I do wish I had saved them all, but as age would have it, my feet are at least a size bigger than they were back then! Oh...the pain of getting old! LOL! Thanks again and have a wonderful day!
Comment from Chrissy710
Well what can one say but well done and although I have also entered this contest you win feet down lol A fantastic rendition so skillfully metered and rhymed Well done made me smile and best of luck Should win
Cheers
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2021
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Well what can one say but well done and although I have also entered this contest you win feet down lol A fantastic rendition so skillfully metered and rhymed Well done made me smile and best of luck Should win
Cheers
Comment Written 28-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2021
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Thank you so very much, Chrissy, for the wonderful review! I'm so happy it made you smile for it was a fun one to write! Thanks again and have a beautiful day!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
My Favorite Shoes
Funny entry for the Shoes contest. I can relate, I used to wear sexy boots because they were my ex-husband's favorite but now I look for comfort. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2021
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My Favorite Shoes
Funny entry for the Shoes contest. I can relate, I used to wear sexy boots because they were my ex-husband's favorite but now I look for comfort. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2021
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Hi, Gypsy! Thank you so much for the great review! I'm so glad you enjoyed and brought back memories of your own! Thank you again and have a wonderful day!