Love's Light
A Choka Poem-for the club challenge18 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This Choka poem, Love's Light, has the proper formatting and creates a scene where innocent beauty appears with no other witness but a nesting bird and these riveted readers.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2021
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This Choka poem, Love's Light, has the proper formatting and creates a scene where innocent beauty appears with no other witness but a nesting bird and these riveted readers.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2021
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Thank you so very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from AnnaLinda
Kym,
Love the alliteration in your title, assonace with bliss, ibis and innocence and ascends. Such dreamy imagery...love the idea of beyond moonlight's gaze and undisturbed balmy waters. Freedom's bliss...Wow!
Mirrored companion
...content to adorn or to me...reflect "Love's Light"
Perfection my friend!
Love, love,
AnnaLinda
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2021
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Kym,
Love the alliteration in your title, assonace with bliss, ibis and innocence and ascends. Such dreamy imagery...love the idea of beyond moonlight's gaze and undisturbed balmy waters. Freedom's bliss...Wow!
Mirrored companion
...content to adorn or to me...reflect "Love's Light"
Perfection my friend!
Love, love,
AnnaLinda
Comment Written 16-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2021
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Thank you so very much AnnaLinda, I enjoyed this different form, as always very much appreciated-your six stars honor me****kahpot
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Enjoyed it very much, Kym. A delightful visit.
Comment from Susan Larson
While I have no knowledge or understanding of the poetry format you have written in, I have to say these are some of the most beautifully strung together words I have ever read! And the picture is breathtaking!
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2021
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While I have no knowledge or understanding of the poetry format you have written in, I have to say these are some of the most beautifully strung together words I have ever read! And the picture is breathtaking!
Comment Written 16-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2021
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Thank you so very much for your wonderful and very encouraging comments, until I tried this form I like you did not know of it, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Mrs. KT
Absolutely stunning, Kahpot!
I am not familiar with Choka, but I certainly can appreciate the artistry that exudes in your exceptionally well-crafted poetic offering. Melodic and filled with beautiful visual imagery.
Thank you for sharing!
diane
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2021
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Absolutely stunning, Kahpot!
I am not familiar with Choka, but I certainly can appreciate the artistry that exudes in your exceptionally well-crafted poetic offering. Melodic and filled with beautiful visual imagery.
Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 16-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2021
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Wow! Thank you for your wonderful and very encouraging review and comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Gloria ....
This is wonderful, kahpot. You have alluded to the moon, and ibis, and rising beauty as through the filter of love.
Each line shows a little more of the light that is found in their placid waters.
Gorgeous indeed. :))
Gloria
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2021
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This is wonderful, kahpot. You have alluded to the moon, and ibis, and rising beauty as through the filter of love.
Each line shows a little more of the light that is found in their placid waters.
Gorgeous indeed. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 15-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2021
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Thank you Gloria, I had fun trying this one, it did take a few corrections from other fanstorians to get it right, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
The image is beautiful and your words about it are equally beautiful. I enjoyed reading your club poem. I like the great imagery created with your well chosen words. I could see everything as I read. Your words create a sense of relaxation and of love of nature's beauties, too. Great job with the style of the poem.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2021
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The image is beautiful and your words about it are equally beautiful. I enjoyed reading your club poem. I like the great imagery created with your well chosen words. I could see everything as I read. Your words create a sense of relaxation and of love of nature's beauties, too. Great job with the style of the poem.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 15-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2021
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Thank you for your wonderful and encouraging comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Love's Light
by kahpot
Beautiful choke poem with good syllables count and connection between lines. The presentation and imagery is lovely. It flows nicely. I like the metaphor. Thank you very much for participating in our club's event. Well done!
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2021
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Love's Light
by kahpot
Beautiful choke poem with good syllables count and connection between lines. The presentation and imagery is lovely. It flows nicely. I like the metaphor. Thank you very much for participating in our club's event. Well done!
Comment Written 15-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2021
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Thank you for your very encouraging comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Sherry Asbury
Fantastic picture!! Gorgeous artwork and gorgeous Choka. This is how I learn to write forms, when someone is kind enough to give patterns and from glorious poems like this. I now have the courage to try... I wish you the best of luck in the competition!
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2021
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Fantastic picture!! Gorgeous artwork and gorgeous Choka. This is how I learn to write forms, when someone is kind enough to give patterns and from glorious poems like this. I now have the courage to try... I wish you the best of luck in the competition!
Comment Written 15-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2021
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Thank you so very much, I am glad you are going to try, I found it was fun, very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You created a sense of calm and serenity in your words here, freedom and beauty, in a balmy undies turned evening, much enjoyed, an ambient write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2021
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You created a sense of calm and serenity in your words here, freedom and beauty, in a balmy undies turned evening, much enjoyed, an ambient write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 15-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2021
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Boogienights
These are lovely images you have created with your words. I have never seen one of these birds, but you made me want to look them up. There is something pure and innocent in your verse...thanks for sharing. :)
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2021
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These are lovely images you have created with your words. I have never seen one of these birds, but you made me want to look them up. There is something pure and innocent in your verse...thanks for sharing. :)
Comment Written 15-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2021
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot