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Nourish - the best you have

A Six Word Poem

20 total reviews 
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
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Such wise and helpful words linked to the picture, make a lovely presentation. It is always best to concentrate on the positive rather than the negative.

Ralf

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 16-Mar-2021
    Thank you for your wonderful comments, yes the positives are very important, very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Nourish - the best you have
by kahpot

Hello, Kym,

Beautiful entry for the
6 Word Poetry contest. Good topic and construction. Good word count. The presentation is outstanding...I love it. Well done! Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2021
    Thank you, the more I try these short forms the more I learn thanks to your and other FS help, as always much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Jesse James Doty
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Ah yes, but we are not perfect, are we? I say we nourish our imperfections and not strive to be perfect at all. Wonderful artwork and love the title. I have been spending my time reading books lately, so if I miss a post or two of yours, please understand. It's nothing personal.
Take care,
Jesse

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 14-Mar-2021
    No not perfect but let us try, yes imperfections are part of us we just don't have to make them a big part, how are you all ok I hope, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
reply by Jesse James Doty on 14-Mar-2021
    I am fine. Just putting in my two cents worth that's all. Our imperfections are what make us human. Yea, to being human. I am glad you appreciate my reviews. Good to know.
    Have a pleasant evening.
    Jesse
Comment from jenintorre
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I really love this miniscule poem. In just six words you have said so much. I find the message profound and uplifting. Great artwork and presentation. Good luck in the competition. Jen.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 14-Mar-2021
    Thank you for your exceptional comments and six stars, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from dragonpoet
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Nature does sometimes seem to have perfection. But if you put these lines to describe humans, you will always need to accept imperfections.
Good luck, keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 14-Mar-2021
    Thank you very much for your wonderful review, much appreciated****kahpot
reply by dragonpoet on 15-Mar-2021
    You are most kindly welcome, kahpot.
    Joan
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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You have made excellent use of your six words in this uplifting piece of advice. Though we must be aware of our flaws and work to eliminate them, we must capitalize on our strengths.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 14-Mar-2021
    Thank you very much, yes we must concentrate on our strengths, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Very nice artwork
and presentation, kahpot.
-You have used your six words well.
-A good topic and positive message.
-It is much better to look at
what is good rather than
emphasize that which isn't.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 14-Mar-2021
    Exactly, thank you very much for your excellent comments and review, very much appreciated****kahpot
reply by Pam (respa) on 15-Mar-2021
    You are very welcome, and I appreciate your reply.
Comment from zanya
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yes it's good advice yet we seem to mostly focus on our 'imperfections'- often to our detriment - so much can be said effectively with so few words lovely pic

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 14-Mar-2021
    Thank you for your wonderful comments and review, very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
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This is a beautifully written 6 word poem. Disregard your imperfections and nurture perfection. I love this in other words disregard the negative and focus on the positive. Nicely done. Beautiful photo as well to go with your words. Good luck on the contest.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 14-Mar-2021
    Thank you for your exceptional review and six stars, exactly the positives, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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This is a great contest entry. Your presentation is perfect--the color scheme, the art, and your precise word choices. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. You give readers much to think about in 6 words. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 14-Mar-2021
    Thank you for your very encouraging comments and review, as always very much appreciated****kahpot