Clocks stand motionless
The Lost87 total reviews
Comment from rjuselius
i am so sorry for your loss! (if you indeed did lose your wife). i love the notion on life standing still as in abbreviation of time. nice one!
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014
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i am so sorry for your loss! (if you indeed did lose your wife). i love the notion on life standing still as in abbreviation of time. nice one!
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
Comment Written 22-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014
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thank you
Comment from c_lucas
After sixty years of being together, losing one mate would feel as if one has loss a major part of himself. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014
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After sixty years of being together, losing one mate would feel as if one has loss a major part of himself. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014
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thank you Mr C
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You're welcome, Gary. Charlie
Comment from Titan Black
Very interesting. Seems to remind me
of something I experienced in the past.
Anyway, your still got your point across.
Keep writing.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014
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Very interesting. Seems to remind me
of something I experienced in the past.
Anyway, your still got your point across.
Keep writing.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014
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thank you
Comment from OLA THOMAS
This is a poem laden with bundles of concealed emotions, done with such great passion for a departing soul. What a stunning artwork depicting 'ascension'. But life goes on after every loss.
ola thomas
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014
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This is a poem laden with bundles of concealed emotions, done with such great passion for a departing soul. What a stunning artwork depicting 'ascension'. But life goes on after every loss.
ola thomas
Comment Written 22-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014
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thank you
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, deepwater, you did an excellent job writing this free style poem about the way life is hard to go on after one's spouse is gone. i enjoyed reading it. i hope this isn't personal
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014
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this is very well written, deepwater, you did an excellent job writing this free style poem about the way life is hard to go on after one's spouse is gone. i enjoyed reading it. i hope this isn't personal
Comment Written 22-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014
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thank you
Comment from royowen
I'm sorry for your loss if indeed that is your loss, it's really tough when one loses a long standing and enduring relationship and friendship, with a spouse or just simply a friend of years duration, well written, and composed write, blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014
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I'm sorry for your loss if indeed that is your loss, it's really tough when one loses a long standing and enduring relationship and friendship, with a spouse or just simply a friend of years duration, well written, and composed write, blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014
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thanks Roy
Comment from His Grayness
Dear GW: I wish I had a six for this very excellent poem! I cannot make any suggestions to improve this work in any way as it is quite excellent as it stands! HIS GRAYNESS: Vance
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014
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Dear GW: I wish I had a six for this very excellent poem! I cannot make any suggestions to improve this work in any way as it is quite excellent as it stands! HIS GRAYNESS: Vance
Comment Written 22-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014
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thank you Vance
Comment from Linda England Bonam
This is a sad poem, especially the end. But it was well written and easy to understand. Good luck with your writing endeavors!
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014
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This is a sad poem, especially the end. But it was well written and easy to understand. Good luck with your writing endeavors!
Comment Written 22-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014
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thank you Linda
Comment from Lastamen
A touching tribute to love that has culminated in the passing of this soul. Sixty years of marriage is surely a life time of devotion to one person - and in our current age it is a triumph to be celebrated. Well done.
Till the last amen
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014
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A touching tribute to love that has culminated in the passing of this soul. Sixty years of marriage is surely a life time of devotion to one person - and in our current age it is a triumph to be celebrated. Well done.
Till the last amen
Comment Written 22-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014
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thank you
Comment from kintesiegel
This is a sad lament for a lost loved one. But her spirit and personality must have become part of you in all that time. For me, my dead loved ones make themselves known to me from the inside--from within my soul where they reside
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014
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This is a sad lament for a lost loved one. But her spirit and personality must have become part of you in all that time. For me, my dead loved ones make themselves known to me from the inside--from within my soul where they reside
Comment Written 22-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014
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thank you
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my most sincere condolences to you. Hope you feel better before to long. It is good for you to share as you have done in this lovely poem