Another Pretty Face
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Comment from Belinda
Hi, Barbara. If I were Joe, I would be disappointed with Sara for being too blunt about her feelings on their relationship. After what he has done for her. Although her reaction is quite normal ... But maybe it's just me. Anyway, interesting chapter.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2010
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Hi, Barbara. If I were Joe, I would be disappointed with Sara for being too blunt about her feelings on their relationship. After what he has done for her. Although her reaction is quite normal ... But maybe it's just me. Anyway, interesting chapter.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2010
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Many of my reviewers are upset with Sara. I hope it all comes out in the wash. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is another great chapter, i am glad you showed him leaving instead of trying to stay and argue his points. she needs to have time to reflect on his reaction or lack of it.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2010
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this is another great chapter, i am glad you showed him leaving instead of trying to stay and argue his points. she needs to have time to reflect on his reaction or lack of it.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your kind review and support. Joe will return when things calm down a little.
Comment from Writeaway...
You proved yourself right there babara, I could find nothing that I could suggest for improvment, your writing is always to the best of its ability, hope you are well, happy new year and keep writing!! :)
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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2010
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You proved yourself right there babara, I could find nothing that I could suggest for improvment, your writing is always to the best of its ability, hope you are well, happy new year and keep writing!! :)
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Comment Written 27-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2010
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Happy New Year!!!! Thank you for your support and kindness.
Comment from c_lucas
This six is for your story and especially this chapter. You have held my attention and proved a valid point. Don't try to hide things from the woman you love, even if it is an engagement rign (I'm guessing.) Good job.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2010
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This six is for your story and especially this chapter. You have held my attention and proved a valid point. Don't try to hide things from the woman you love, even if it is an engagement rign (I'm guessing.) Good job.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your review and support. I appreciate both. I am not sure what Joe is hiding in the duffle bag. We will have to wait and see.
Happy New Year, Charlie
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You're welcome, Barbara. Likewise. Charlie