Another Pretty Face
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Comment from jadapenn
Ah, plenty of frustration and conflict and rainbow coloured paint. Sara is getting in a right royal know with Joe and this is not good. Love Dani trying to console her. I wish they would trace Cassie now. Hope they haven't molested the child.
Well done. I enjoyed. luv jada
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2010
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Ah, plenty of frustration and conflict and rainbow coloured paint. Sara is getting in a right royal know with Joe and this is not good. Love Dani trying to console her. I wish they would trace Cassie now. Hope they haven't molested the child.
Well done. I enjoyed. luv jada
Comment Written 24-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2010
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Thank you for the kind review and support. I couldn't do it without you.
Comment from sk42rn
Standing at the ready for moral and emotional support. I am more concerned for you with the chemo as well. I am sorry, but you will get through this. I hate cancer. It has taken so many lives unnecessarily in my family. I just hate it.
But hey, the story moves forward and I feel the emotion and the fear in the words. Nothing worse than losing a child. Keep up the faith and the good writing.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2010
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Standing at the ready for moral and emotional support. I am more concerned for you with the chemo as well. I am sorry, but you will get through this. I hate cancer. It has taken so many lives unnecessarily in my family. I just hate it.
But hey, the story moves forward and I feel the emotion and the fear in the words. Nothing worse than losing a child. Keep up the faith and the good writing.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2010
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Thank you for your review and support. I need the support,right now.
Comment from c_lucas
Sara is showing the frustration and worry is wearing her down. Joe is walking on egg shells around her. This is very well written with very good imagery.
Matt, but he always stays un (in) control.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2010
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Sara is showing the frustration and worry is wearing her down. Joe is walking on egg shells around her. This is very well written with very good imagery.
Matt, but he always stays un (in) control.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2010
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Thank you for your kind review and continued support.
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You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie
Comment from Writeaway...
Excellent and well-written even through this tough time your going through your writing is still at its best. This is a very interesting novel and a great read, I can picture it on bookshops in the not to distant future, excellent job babara, best wishes, Jacob, keep writing!! :)
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reply by the author on 24-Oct-2010
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Excellent and well-written even through this tough time your going through your writing is still at its best. This is a very interesting novel and a great read, I can picture it on bookshops in the not to distant future, excellent job babara, best wishes, Jacob, keep writing!! :)
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Comment Written 24-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2010
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Thank you for your kind review and support. I appreciate both.