Another Pretty Face
Viewing comments for Chapter 35 "Chapter 15; part one"Can love survive small town gossip?
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Comment from cheery blossom
Good romantic read. Almost too good. It probably would have been more true to life to life if there had been a difficulty or problem to be solved. The conversation is realistic and believable. Good luck with your story.
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Good romantic read. Almost too good. It probably would have been more true to life to life if there had been a difficulty or problem to be solved. The conversation is realistic and believable. Good luck with your story.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2011
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Sara's daughter was kidnapped by a porno ring, how many more problems would you like to see? (LOL) Thank you for your review.
Comment from Writeaway...
Barbara your writing astounds me, an excellent job once again, you kept me enthralled from beginning to end and I can suggest nothing for improvement, excellent job, wishing you well, keep writing!! :)
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Barbara your writing astounds me, an excellent job once again, you kept me enthralled from beginning to end and I can suggest nothing for improvement, excellent job, wishing you well, keep writing!! :)
Comment Written 30-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and continued support.
Comment from Shirley McLain
LOve the chapter. All the characters and dialogue are absolutly wonderful. You kept the action to the end and then left me dangling again with the wedding. Blessings to you my friend.
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LOve the chapter. All the characters and dialogue are absolutly wonderful. You kept the action to the end and then left me dangling again with the wedding. Blessings to you my friend.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2011
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Thank you for the kind review and encouraging words.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Very well put together chapter. Hope you are feeling . I keep you in me thoughts and prayers. Take are of yourself first-sthied. , and treat yourself as such. Debbie
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Very well put together chapter. Hope you are feeling . I keep you in me thoughts and prayers. Take are of yourself first-sthied. , and treat yourself as such. Debbie
Comment Written 30-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your thoughtfulness and kind review.
Comment from adewpearl
Look, the ducks are swimming - add comma
walk to the black Corvette - add capital C
A surprise wedding, now THAT is romantic :-)
Our mom's coordinated - drop the apostrophe
both our moms' and Cassie's dresses - add apostrophe after moms
He sure is a take control guy. LOL
Only 11 pages to go - oh, I will miss Joe :-) Brooke
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Look, the ducks are swimming - add comma
walk to the black Corvette - add capital C
A surprise wedding, now THAT is romantic :-)
Our mom's coordinated - drop the apostrophe
both our moms' and Cassie's dresses - add apostrophe after moms
He sure is a take control guy. LOL
Only 11 pages to go - oh, I will miss Joe :-) Brooke
Comment Written 30-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2011
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Thank you for catching those errors. I am all over them.
Comment from The Stranger
well Sara was addoring the flowers when she got the shock of her life, when Joe proposed to her, the flowers were for their wedding, all Sara has to do, is accept
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well Sara was addoring the flowers when she got the shock of her life, when Joe proposed to her, the flowers were for their wedding, all Sara has to do, is accept
Comment Written 30-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2011
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We will have to wait and see if she does or doesn't accept. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Sarah_Goldwell
Yaay he popped the question, about time lol. I can see this is coming to a very satisfying conclusion. Be interesting to see what you turn out next x
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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2011
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Yaay he popped the question, about time lol. I can see this is coming to a very satisfying conclusion. Be interesting to see what you turn out next x
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Comment Written 30-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2011
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I am not sure which way I am going next. I have two ideas I am playing with. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from L.lora
Darn Barbara, it was difficult
reading this through the misted
eyes you created with your wonderful
descriptions that created awesome
images. Excellent flow and dialogue.
One little typo=" I love Joe and want(to) marry him,"
a most enjoyable read. Lora
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Darn Barbara, it was difficult
reading this through the misted
eyes you created with your wonderful
descriptions that created awesome
images. Excellent flow and dialogue.
One little typo=" I love Joe and want(to) marry him,"
a most enjoyable read. Lora
Comment Written 30-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2011
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I have fixed that missing little word. Thank you for your eagle eye.
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No problem, I often do the same thing... :)
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It seems no matter how many times I reread, I miss those little things.
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I've often thought I needed a private proof reader on staff--I always read things the way I thought I wrote them...I guess thats just the way it is with us "brilliant" minds--did I make you smile? :) hugs
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You sure did. Yes, I often read what I think it says instead of what I actually wrote.
Comment from c_lucas
Something tells me that Joe has made a big mistake by keeping Sara out of the planning stage. Fireworks are in the makings. Very good job.
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Something tells me that Joe has made a big mistake by keeping Sara out of the planning stage. Fireworks are in the makings. Very good job.
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Comment Written 30-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2011
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You are soooooooooooo right. Thank you for the kind review.
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You're welcome. Barbara. Charlie