Poppy and Odi's Mission
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Comment from Mary Shifman
Oh, I do enjoy children's poetry and you do it so well. I love the rhyme and rhythm. Your illustrations are lovely. I read the previous installment so I knew the story but your synopsis at the tip was a good reminder and giving the back story for those who hadn't read it was a great idea. I seem to recall that you are doing a book for the child of a friend. This is such a lovely gift. Well done.
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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2021
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Oh, I do enjoy children's poetry and you do it so well. I love the rhyme and rhythm. Your illustrations are lovely. I read the previous installment so I knew the story but your synopsis at the tip was a good reminder and giving the back story for those who hadn't read it was a great idea. I seem to recall that you are doing a book for the child of a friend. This is such a lovely gift. Well done.
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Comment Written 29-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2021
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Yes, this is the book. It will have some colouring pages in it as well as the other pictures. I'm so pleased you enjoyed reading it. I'm working on the next part now. Thank you so much for the lovely review. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from BethShelby
I'm enjoying you adorable rhyming story of the whale with a toothache. I know children will love it as well. I like the rhyme format you are using with short lines. This seems to me something that would appeal to children.
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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2021
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I'm enjoying you adorable rhyming story of the whale with a toothache. I know children will love it as well. I like the rhyme format you are using with short lines. This seems to me something that would appeal to children.
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Comment Written 29-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2021
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Thanks so much, Beth. I think there are just two more parts. (could be three) I'm glad you are still enjoying the story. Warm hugs. Sandra xx