Comment from Andrewajgblue

Excellent

I really felt the regret in this poem, you managed to capture the mood really well, great wording gave it a very visual feel, it made it very enjoyable read, well done,
Andrew

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2014

Comment from CHIGYSISKI

Excellent

LOVELY, NICELY WRITTEN POEM ON PROCRASTINATION AND WASTED TIME.IT TEACHES THAT ONE SHOULD PERHAPS NOT DWELL ON YESTERDAYS' MISTAKES AND MOVE ON TO GRAB HOLD OF THE OPPORTUNITIES THAT PRESENT THEMSELVES TO US. BEST OF LUCK IN THE CONTEST.

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2014

Comment from Cajungirl

Excellent

This is a beautiful poem. For so many of us spend our time thinking about what could have been instead of living for the present. Great contest entry.

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2014

Comment from chasennov

Excellent

Choose One Of The Following Titles Contest Submission
"Wasted Time" This is an excellent poem you have created here. Waisted time is an element that nobody really can afford. Well done.

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2014

Comment from mbagby23

Excellent

I know I'm guilty of wasting time. I could have, would have, but didn't cause I was being just to lazy for my good. Well done.

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2014

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

Great imagery ...a sad smile tugs at lips......
But if you hadn't WASTED the day we wouldn't have poetry........
To some who are busy bees neat clean fastidious ......they do not understand the glory of the poem from a wasted day
God bless

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 Comment Written 22-Aug-2014

Comment from Domino 2

Excellent

VERY poetic free verse. Idamarty.

Excellent metaphors and imagery in this very thoughtful and entertaining write on 'wasted time'.

Good luck and best wishes, Ray.



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 Comment Written 22-Aug-2014