Poppy and Odi's Mission
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Poppy and Odi's Mission 2"A Cube 16 Poem Book
62 total reviews
Comment from nomi338
How telling that the kids' major concern was in not becoming whale food rather than the fear of drowning. It is also to me at least, interesting that they were also concerned with could they perform the task, more so than will doing this thing put us at risk of drowning. Children can be very brave when confronting a task that involves helping someone in need, often ignoring personal risk. This is a very teachable story, please continue on.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2021
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How telling that the kids' major concern was in not becoming whale food rather than the fear of drowning. It is also to me at least, interesting that they were also concerned with could they perform the task, more so than will doing this thing put us at risk of drowning. Children can be very brave when confronting a task that involves helping someone in need, often ignoring personal risk. This is a very teachable story, please continue on.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2021
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What a lovely review, Nomi, thank you so very much. I do like to have children helping each other, and other creatures. We all need help and childhood is a good place to start learning. I'm so very happy you agree. Thank you, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
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Reading your delightful stories has become a distinct pleasure for me. I have every intention of continuing to do so.
Comment from damommy
I love this!!!! Everyone will of any and every age. Great idea with the bubbles. I especially like this part: "We've asked some fish, sea bass and trout, but none knew how to pull it out!" I can hardly wait for the next chapter!
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2021
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I love this!!!! Everyone will of any and every age. Great idea with the bubbles. I especially like this part: "We've asked some fish, sea bass and trout, but none knew how to pull it out!" I can hardly wait for the next chapter!
Comment Written 29-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2021
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Aw thank you, dear SATP! I'm so pleased you enjoyed this part. I had a chuckle when I wrote in the the sea bass and trout! Lol. What could they do?? And a big thank you for the golden star!! Love you lots dear sister! :)) Sandra xxxx
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I've just sent you an email. I want an immediate reply before I go insane with worry!!
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Just sent it!
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I'm so relieved. I've replied to you. xxxxx
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And me back to you. hahahahahaha
Comment from JennStar
Absolutely loved this could soooo see myself reading this to my nephews. Love the pictures that are with this as well ... I loved the
"Then Odi's eyes
grew big and wide.
"Does that mean we
must climb inside?"
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2021
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Absolutely loved this could soooo see myself reading this to my nephews. Love the pictures that are with this as well ... I loved the
"Then Odi's eyes
grew big and wide.
"Does that mean we
must climb inside?"
Comment Written 29-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2021
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Hello, Jenn, thank you so much for reading this second part. I love your review. Thank you also for the sixth golden star! That was so nice of you. Part 3 coming soon. I hope you join me again. Warm hugs, Sandra xx
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
How I wish I had opportunities to read such wonderful stories during my childhood days.! This is perfect for children's reading. Lovely rhyming and ballads. I will surely share this with my grandkids! Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2021
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How I wish I had opportunities to read such wonderful stories during my childhood days.! This is perfect for children's reading. Lovely rhyming and ballads. I will surely share this with my grandkids! Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 29-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2021
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Thank you, Seshadri, for this really nice review. I'm hoping I have it right for new readers. Please let me know if your grandchildren like it or not. Thank you! Warm hugs. Sandra xxx
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I am wondering myself how they will get back out, plus there is this little shark problem. I am enjoying this story and I know children will love it. I can't image they would not. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2021
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I am wondering myself how they will get back out, plus there is this little shark problem. I am enjoying this story and I know children will love it. I can't image they would not. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2021
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Wow, Barbara, when I saw your picture, I had to double check it was you! You're lovely!
Thank you so much for the six stars for this part. I'm so pleased you liked it. I'm working hard on my editing of Betrayal, and this is something light-hearted to ease the pressure. Thanks so much for this lovely review. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from Aiona
How fun! I love the idea if hardened air bubbles. I didn't see any typos, and it was perfect for a good children's reading. I love rhyming ballads, plus the rhymes help new readers.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2021
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How fun! I love the idea if hardened air bubbles. I didn't see any typos, and it was perfect for a good children's reading. I love rhyming ballads, plus the rhymes help new readers.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2021
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Thank you so much, Aiona, for this really lovely review and for the sixth gold star award!! That is so nice of your. I'm glad you enjoyed this part. Two more to come! :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from amahra
Ah, that was mean; lol I Was really wrapped up in the story. Now I'll have to wait, like some little kid to find if the kids pulled the whale's tooth. I loved the artwork and know kids will too.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2021
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Ah, that was mean; lol I Was really wrapped up in the story. Now I'll have to wait, like some little kid to find if the kids pulled the whale's tooth. I loved the artwork and know kids will too.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2021
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Thank you so much, Amahra! What a lovely review. I'm so pleased you enjoyed this part. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from alexisleech
What a clever lady you are! I was wondering how you were going to deal with the breathing underwater issue, and you've come up with a perfect solution! My thanks again for this wonderful gift for my grandchildren. I will be forever grateful for your friendship and generosity.
Alexis xxxxxxxx
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2021
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What a clever lady you are! I was wondering how you were going to deal with the breathing underwater issue, and you've come up with a perfect solution! My thanks again for this wonderful gift for my grandchildren. I will be forever grateful for your friendship and generosity.
Alexis xxxxxxxx
Comment Written 29-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2021
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You are so very welcome, Alexis. I'm just so pleased you enjoyed reading this one. I hope Poppy and Odi like it too. Thank you so much for the golden star, my friend. Sending a warm hug. Love, Sandra xx
Comment from Pantygynt
I see you found a picture of an orca to go with this great little story.
'How can they breath' => sp breathe. It's a typo really. You got it right a few lines later.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2021
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I see you found a picture of an orca to go with this great little story.
'How can they breath' => sp breathe. It's a typo really. You got it right a few lines later.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2021
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Yes, I wish I could draw, I have some brilliant ideas in my head, but you wouldn't even recognise my matchstick men! Thank you for picking up that missing e. I sometime type faster than my brain dictates!! Lol. Thanks for the golden sixth star, Jim, that's so nice of you. Warm hugs. :)) Sandra xxxx
Comment from Pam (respa)
-A very good follow up
to this whale of a tale, Sandra.
-Love all the artwork and presentation.
-The mermaid has a lot to accomplish.
-One of my favorite parts is
asking the "sea bass and trout."
-The tooth image is priceless;
I can see you are identifying with this story.
-I also like when they ask if
they have to go inside.
-Well done and enjoyable; kids
will love it!! And so do Iš???
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2021
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-A very good follow up
to this whale of a tale, Sandra.
-Love all the artwork and presentation.
-The mermaid has a lot to accomplish.
-One of my favorite parts is
asking the "sea bass and trout."
-The tooth image is priceless;
I can see you are identifying with this story.
-I also like when they ask if
they have to go inside.
-Well done and enjoyable; kids
will love it!! And so do Iš???
Comment Written 29-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2021
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Thank you so very much, Pam! I'm over the moon (again) that you enjoyed this part! Yes, that was a picture of my tooth! LOL. I'm glad you liked the sea bass and trout, the mermaid had to ask, and they were passing by at the time. Lol. Thanks so much for the six stars, and this fabulous review. Sending hugs and love. Sandra xxx
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You are very welcome and deserving of the stars and review, Sandra. I'm glad you are over the moon. I think there is less toothache there! Did Graham do the artwork for the tooth? I don't know why that image appealed to me; it just did.